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It looks pretty solid already. I like that the characters look like steel beams. I think the I has too much weight. Try to make it the same weight as the other characters.
What's the story with the dots?
Some little things I would change:
1) The little angular accent left to the I: I would make it horizontal. 2) I could be mistaken, but is the lower half of the Z broader than the upper? If it is, then I would make it the same width as the upper half. 3) The lower section of the y has this peak. I would make it like in the Z's.
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Jakob Essbüchl commented:Looks much better now.
Maybe try to move the lower box of the y a bit lower and to the left, so that it's right under the upper left box. As it is now the y looks a bit short.
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Hi, Jakob. Thanks for the comments. I worked with the 'I' but I am fond of the angular accent. And you were right of Z and Y. Change it. Check out the new file.