A Review of My Branding by x x

looks fun

  • x x

    x x

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 2
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    looks fun

    Posted on Dec 04, 2009 at 5:53 PM

    Fix your kerning, notice the space between the K and the e? also the vand H are too close, just set teh type right.

    Also, orange is the color most associated with creativity, however, you might want to go duotone and introduce a second color, perhaps in the gradient,

    Lastly, your tag line should be lowercase, Maybe save the uppercase on the word UNLEASED so it emphasizes the word.

    • Kevin Tomasic
      Kevin Tomasic commented:
      Posted: on Dec 04, 2009 at 5:57 PM

      You're right about the kerning, I just haven't gotten around to it yet.

      Orange is actually one of my last choices specifically for that reason. I prefer not to be like everyone else.

      Good idea about the tag, I'll change it.

      Thanks!