A Review of 2010 campaign by Nate Hamilton

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  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
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    Posted on Dec 04, 2009 at 10:42 AM

    First things first, take the lens flair off, please!

    I like your direction here. I think you could use a different picture. Work on your typography a bit especially your heading. The green bar could also be a bit more interesting. It's a bit plain and boring.

    Great start here though, keep at it.

    • Anderson Torres
      Anderson Torres commented:
      Posted: on Dec 04, 2009 at 11:00 AM

      it is a draft the image in the center was the first we found.. it will be random with the jobs done so far... We are thinking about the menu bar, do you suggest anything?

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    • Nate Hamilton
      Nate Hamilton commented:
      Posted: on Dec 04, 2009 at 11:03 AM

      Something more organic looking to with the rest of your design. Something maybe like this:

      http://www.stcharlesmd.com/

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    • Anderson Torres
      Anderson Torres commented:
      Posted: on Dec 04, 2009 at 11:12 AM

      Got it, working on it. Thanks for feedback.

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