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I think that if everything was black, it should work better. I don't like the yellow thing at all... But I lke the logo... I like more the logo with shadows and gradients...
I don't think that the typography in "flexible packaging solutions" is good... the place isn't good too... I think that de S in supreme should be capitalized...

unfortunately, the client has got a lot of control with the design - let's see what the client says with revised design