A Review of Email Campaign by Mary Pruter

seasons greetings

  • Mary Pruter

    Mary Pruter

    Rank: 7 Student

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    seasons greetings

    Posted on Dec 02, 2009 at 5:48 PM

    Fun and festive. I like the way the ribbon that says "order by dec" wraps around the box it's covering.

    I don't like the way the seasons greeting card sits. I think it's the way it's angeled outward. It kinda looks like it's floating on air.

    I'm also not sure I like that snow very much. Maybe play around with other snow images and see if you can find a better one.

    • Julio Rivera
      Julio Rivera commented:
      Posted: on Dec 03, 2009 at 10:23 AM

      hey thanks for the feedback I made alot of changes to it.

    • Julio Rivera
      Julio Rivera commented:
      Posted: on Dec 03, 2009 at 10:25 AM

      the snow give it the xmas look lol. i didnt want to put snow flakes because it will take away for the point in this email blast.