A Review of Mock for Portfolio Website by Amy Feger

space between words and color of white on yellow.

  • Amy Feger

    Amy Feger

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    space between words and color of white on yellow.

    Posted on Dec 01, 2009 at 8:07 PM

    Hi Swarat!

    I think this is nice. Just a few space issues:

    The word "contact" in your navigation button is not centered in the box.

    I would change the color of the words " Bright Idea" and "More" from white to a darker more contrasting color. Rather than white against yellow. Maybe consider keeping all the "more>" words the same color throughout your pages?

    I would maybe add curly quotes to your quote. Maybe bring in the space between all the following words: "Get in touch", "How we may help" and Some of our clientS" (don't forget the "s" in clients)

    I like the dots and the simplicity.

    • Swarat Ghosh
      Swarat Ghosh commented:
      Posted: on Dec 01, 2009 at 10:22 PM

      thanks Amy

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    • Keli Marks
      Keli Marks commented:
      Posted: on Dec 03, 2009 at 12:43 AM

      I really like this. I agree, the quote is competeing in size. I would consider maybe having: nav then quote then work display. I like the clear concise how we help you, our clients etc... part of the page. I think more and more this kinda of upfront clear communication is best.

      if you don't want to move the quote i would at least give some more space above the yellow bar, its a bit crowded. Other then that this is great.

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