A Review of Logo redesign by Zeno Popovici

The symbol and text do not match together

  • Zeno Popovici

    Zeno Popovici

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    The symbol and text do not match together

    Posted on Dec 01, 2009 at 6:21 PM

    Hey,

    Just my two cents:

    1. The symbol and the text do not match together. The feathers are have rounded edges and contrast (3d-like) while the text is just plain but features sharp edges.

    I love the concept, but I keep looking at it and the things I explained above make it look out of place, weird.

    It may be just me, but this is how I see it. I would try to make them fit together.

    1. Second thing is, you should properly kern and align NEWBIRD with DESIGN. Right now the N doesn't align with the B above in any way.
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