A Review of TextBLOG by Jas Fun

Not a bad start

  • Jas Fun

    Jas Fun

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
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    Not a bad start

    Posted on Dec 01, 2009 at 4:10 PM

    I would make the heading smaller - its a bit much! And change the "daily chapter" subheading to the same font as the menu headings so there is some flow. May be even get rid of the blue background or lighten it alot! The yellow line doesn't really sit well . The whole thing looks like the page is cut in half - try make the page look like a "whole page". Otherwise it is a good start - well done!

    • Nate Hamilton
      Nate Hamilton commented:
      Posted: on Dec 01, 2009 at 5:39 PM

      The banner is unable to change and I am not quite sure what font you are talking about...everything is in Georgia. I also am unclear about the "whole page" comment, can you please clarify? Thanks for the feedback!

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    • Jas Fun
      Jas Fun commented:
      Posted: on Dec 08, 2009 at 8:32 PM

      i didn't realise it was a banner. The shot you have looks like the banner takes up half a webpage! Could you match the font colour in the banner with a lighter brown? With a blue background similar to the banner? It doesn't really flow with the grey font as New bird says below.... sorry bout the confusion re:banner!

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