A Review of Email Campaign by Guy Blaskey

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  • Guy Blaskey

    Guy Blaskey

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    Posted on Dec 01, 2009 at 3:58 PM

    The design looks great, but I would make the copy line more relevant than 'bring your digital photos to life'...

    Something mentioning gifts like 'Give a personal gift this year' or 'givea gift they will treasure'

    And give it some immediacy by adding "order by x December and to guarantee arrive for Christmas"

    • Julio Rivera
      Julio Rivera commented:
      Posted: on Dec 01, 2009 at 6:05 PM

      Yea I think that is a great idea being that xmas is coming

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