A Review of Dead hand by Rob Modzelewski

Unify the sense of lightsource and dimensionality

  • Rob Modzelewski

    Rob Modzelewski

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    Unify the sense of lightsource and dimensionality

    Posted on Nov 29, 2009 at 11:18 PM

    I like the idea of a hand twisting forth from the roots, grasping for the sky. I recommend adding a sense of volume to both the hand by painting in shadow and highlights. Also, the sky and land each have about 50% of the picture. I recommend changing that. Try changing the land/sky ratio to 1/3, either in favor of sky or land. Right now, that particular symmetry is making the picture too static.

    Best of Luck!