A Review of Logo Etnomark by Nurit Avni

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  • Nurit Avni

    Nurit Avni

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    Posted on Nov 29, 2009 at 9:58 PM

    It looks like a start for a good logo.

    I do think it needs to be pushed further - the placement in the rounded square with the gradient looks more default than intentional to me.

    I think it stays at the initial stage of "quotation marks + Etnomark" and it needs something extra to make it stand out. One example of where quotation marks are used cleverly can be found here : http://creattica.com/logos/talkmore/2320

    I like that the marks start to look like two people facing each other - maybe this can be pushed further? Just an idea.

    I think you have a great subject matter, dealing with anthropology and different cultures and you need to have more fun with it :)