A Review of Indonesian Christian Church Website by Shane Kingery

big impact - minor things to change.

  • Shane Kingery

    Shane Kingery

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    big impact - minor things to change.

    Posted on Nov 28, 2009 at 6:17 PM

    Hi Riady,

    I like it.

    The box below 'transforming... into Godly leaders..." seems drab. Not sure what to do about that. I'm not a huge fan of light grey, though. It reminds me of older websites.

    I LOVE the picture along the top and on the left side. I almost wish I could see the top of the left picture - what does the ceiling of the church look like? I bet it's beautiful.

    The top picture (with the outside of the church) feels a little dark on the right side. Is that the way the picture was taken or is it darkened intentionally?

    The word "godless" isn't capitalized, but if it is for the sake of a header, is "people" supposed to be too?

    I really like the 1/2 rounded corner 1/2 square corner thing going on.

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 28, 2009 at 6:35 PM

      thanks for the feedback Shane, the picture is darkened intentionally to put the focus on the logo but feel free to provide feedback whether there would be any better way to to so.

      You are right, just a typo for the word People - I'll fix them soon

      thanks heap

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    • Shane Kingery
      Shane Kingery commented:
      Posted: on Nov 29, 2009 at 8:14 PM

      well, it looks like a beautiful building with the stone and I'm wondering if it would make the header brighter by only darkening the portion under the logo (or dark from the left most portion of the header just to the right of the logo). That way, the rest of the image is more visible...

      I agree with Swarat that the featured link section doesn't pop as much as I hope it to. Maybe the background could be white and you could delineate that section with color/subtle border or something like that. The rest of the page looks beautiful, rich, inspiring, then the grey portion is just there. :oI

      Hope you are well.

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      Shane Kingery commented:
      Posted: on Nov 29, 2009 at 8:14 PM

      well, it looks like a beautiful building with the stone and I'm wondering if it would make the header brighter by only darkening the portion under the logo (or dark from the left most portion of the header just to the right of the logo). That way, the rest of the image is more visible...

      I agree with Swarat that the featured link section doesn't pop as much as I hope it to. Maybe the background could be white and you could delineate that section with color/subtle border or something like that. The rest of the page looks beautiful, rich, inspiring, then the grey portion is just there. :oI

      Hope you are well.

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    • Shane Kingery
      Shane Kingery commented:
      Posted: on Nov 29, 2009 at 8:14 PM

      well, it looks like a beautiful building with the stone and I'm wondering if it would make the header brighter by only darkening the portion under the logo (or dark from the left most portion of the header just to the right of the logo). That way, the rest of the image is more visible...

      I agree with Swarat that the featured link section doesn't pop as much as I hope it to. Maybe the background could be white and you could delineate that section with color/subtle border or something like that. The rest of the page looks beautiful, rich, inspiring, then the grey portion is just there. :oI

      Hope you are well.

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    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 30, 2009 at 4:49 AM

      thanks Shane - let me try that recommendation :)

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