A Review of Church website by Shane Kingery

a few bits - nice concept

  • Shane Kingery

    Shane Kingery

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    a few bits - nice concept

    Posted on Nov 28, 2009 at 6:02 PM

    Hi Mike,

    I think this is really clean and sharp.

    A few minor things:

    1. I can't read the 'do this in remembrance of me" very easily.

    2. The top half looks more modern than the lower half - maybe because the lower half has flat color in thirds? Not sure. Maybe because all the square edges?

    3. The logo could probably be bigger.

    4. Why is there texture on the left side of the background but not the right? There could be a good reason, I'm just not sure.

    Good luck.

    --Shane

    • Mike Madison
      Mike Madison commented:
      Posted: on Nov 28, 2009 at 6:22 PM

      lol no good reason about the texture... i just forgot to copy it to the other side.... i meant to. I added another photo, you gave me an idea, buy saying the flat colors... let me know if you think it looks better