• Daina Reed

    Daina Reed

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    708

    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
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    where am i?

    Posted on Nov 28, 2009 at 1:13 PM

    I love the design and the copy!

    Only concern is tho I like the name of your site on it's side and it matches the gun...i would want your name to be more clear so I know where I am.

    I'm not crazy about the opening tagline you can get more with a kind word and design and i don't think squeezing the u in design works at all. looks like a mistake and just isn't working.

    maybe try reversing it...putting the opening "the dashing and debonair.." in the big type and the big type in the smaller opening type.