• Shane Kingery

    Shane Kingery

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    beautiful.

    Posted on Nov 27, 2009 at 6:41 PM

    My heart skips a beat - either from the design or form the gun pointed at my forehead. Not sure.

    I really LOVE the look of this concept and, although I would probably agree with other people that the body text isn't as easily read through as it probably should be, I would also say that the layout invites me to read on to the end more than I expected it would. Did you get that run-on? Hope so.

    If there's a way to make the body text just a bit more inviting to read, it would work.

    Beautiful.