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you have 3 feathers so give it 3 colors-yellow in the middle so it wont get lost at small print size.
Adjust the kerning on DESIGN to have it extend the length of NEWBIRD. It may have to be a bit bolder if reduced to a small size.
Love the 3-d effect but do a version without it in case (again) it needs to be reduced to a tiny size.
Overall a very nice design. Very professional and clean.
oh yeah... lose the white line.
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I like the geometry and flow of the design but I have to say that my first impression was of leaves, rather than feathers, possibly due to the green coloration of two of the elements. I would also be a little leery of the shaded 3D effect, as this can become awkward at smaller scales. As others have said, the white line in the text distracts rather than enhances. I would also omit the trademark symbol. Proprietary design is normally implied, isn't it? Looks real nice, but I would consider trying a "flat" version.