A Review of Elegance Style Lounge Logo by Jorge Tamariz

Re-balance the whole thing, too much upper left

  • Jorge Tamariz

    Jorge Tamariz

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 2
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    Re-balance the whole thing, too much upper left

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 6:42 AM

    I would use a more curved font without hard edges or 90º angles.

    • Ros 89
      Ros 89 commented:
      Posted: on Dec 12, 2009 at 11:00 PM

      Nice :) the pink version is the only one i liked.

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    • Todd Pagel
      Todd Pagel commented:
      Posted: on Mar 14, 2010 at 11:23 PM

      This one has a lot going on as far as form, at least for me. I saw an "e" of course in the artwork above the text, as well as a pseudo chaise lounge, as well as a feminine figure sitting on the floor, knees bent, with head bowed and arms back to brace herself. Maybe i am seeing too much in it, but all that hit me at once. I like it a lot! I like the second coloration because it is not predictably feminine, yet is definitely soft

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