A Review of Christmas Poster 2009 by marc

contrast

  • marc

    marc

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    contrast

    Posted on Nov 25, 2009 at 5:20 AM

    Very hard to read the text - all of the text.

    White and gold/yellow font on a bright red background is very difficult to read. I'm guessing you've added drop shadow to try and make the text more readable - this hasn't worked unfortunately.

    I'd also make more of a "statement" about the date/time/place.

    Order the text by importance.

    • Riady Santoso
      Riady Santoso commented:
      Posted: on Nov 25, 2009 at 12:37 PM

      I have darkened the red background - but probably is not dark enough to make the text stands out. Thanks for the feedback Marc - I will work on it

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