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This is nice as a concept, i think once this is refined (alignment of objects, sharper edges, tidier nav) it will be a very, very nice design. A few other things you could try is maybe moving the buildings to either the left or the right to allow for some more serious content on the opposing side. maybe a footer will help finish the site off. I feel as though there is too much dark aswell, like mentioned before, improve on the contrast maybe add in a very subtle texture on the background and some lighting effects and youll be away laughing.
