A Review of new home page design for a jewellery e commerce website by Miro

lose the text

  • Miro

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    lose the text

    Posted on Nov 23, 2009 at 2:56 PM

    One thing: Lose the text under the jewels and make the jewels your primary content.

    Also highlight the boxes "Objects of desire" etc more, they don´t stand out from the rest of the content now.

    • Rajiv Mehta
      Rajiv Mehta commented:
      Posted: on Nov 24, 2009 at 12:54 AM

      did not understant 'lose the text under the jewels'..Please do clarify.noted yr obs for boxes at bottom.any example you can show re how to redesign boxes to make them look up.tks and await your reply.rgds rajiv

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    • Miro
      Miro commented:
      Posted: on Nov 24, 2009 at 9:58 AM

      Hi Rajiv! With the first one I tried to tell you to take away the big text part, but now I see that you need it for SEO purposes.

      And about the boxes, they are now white and don´t stand out from the rest of the content, make their background blue and use dark purple/blue/white text, for example.

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