Ciocanel Razvan

The Eye

By Ciocanel Razvan

   on Oct 03, 2009
16 Reviews5 Votes1 Favorite528 Views

Concept Reviews

  • Miro

    Miro

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    sky

    Posted on Oct 03, 2009 at 12:37 PM

    Somehow the sky doesn't fit in, maybe it should be blurred. But the eye looks very nice.

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    Looks great, good work

    Posted on Oct 03, 2009 at 8:04 PM

    Nice photoshop work. The only part that bothers my ever so slightly is the nose line...maybe too light? Everything else looks great, good job.

  • Metin Ucar

    Metin Ucar

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    stars

    Posted on Oct 03, 2009 at 1:49 PM

    Whoa! It looks amazing. but the stars in the background don't seem realistic. I'd use less stars and colour them with different shades of blue.

  • Robert Benjamin

    Robert Benjamin

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    Less shine

    Posted on Oct 03, 2009 at 5:16 PM

    Make the eye a tiny bit less shiny, it's hard to see the top part of it. I would also focus more on the eye and not the eyelashes.

  • Mester Catalin

    Mester Catalin

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    stars, nose

    Posted on Oct 03, 2009 at 5:41 PM

    The stars don't really look good ...see to little of them.

    The nose that line blue glow doesn't look to good.

    On the bottom of the eye on the left it's a white spot.

    MEster.

  • Tyler Cooper

    Tyler Cooper

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    Nice

    Posted on Oct 03, 2009 at 6:04 PM

    Good job! I do agree with everyone on the stars though.

  • Ryan Elliott Turner

    Ryan Elliott Turner

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    Blur stars!

    Posted on Oct 04, 2009 at 2:54 PM

    The reason the starts look wrong is because of a dual depth of field - a very shallow one on the face and then a broad one in the background. Blur the stars, it'll fit in.

  • Yair Mor

    Yair Mor

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    The line on the nose

    Posted on Oct 05, 2009 at 5:06 AM

    This is an amazing image! The earth reflecting in the eye is not a new concept but it's done here pretty good.

    I think that blue light that goes along the nose is distracting.

  • Emanuele Toscano

    Emanuele Toscano

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    try to blur eyelashes and stars

    Posted on Oct 05, 2009 at 10:32 AM

    I like the eye itself, but stars and eyelashes are too focused, making the whole image look "wrong", somehow. Also, a little less stars should look better, I guess... apart from that, it is a good job, very attractive

  • John Sullivan

    John Sullivan

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    The stars...

    Posted on Oct 06, 2009 at 12:24 AM

    Nice work with the eye. The stars need to be screened back or blurred.

  • Josh Star

    Josh Star

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    Nice!

    Posted on Oct 07, 2009 at 8:58 AM

    This wallpaper is really quite a remarkable effort. But I would have prefered it if the face was a bit more visible. That might add some expression to the whole theme. Just an idea, but great work overall!

  • Andrew Kaytor

    Andrew Kaytor

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    Depth of field

    Posted on Oct 07, 2009 at 11:36 AM

    I like it alot. One thing that catches my eye immediately though.. the depth of field is shallow and focused on the eye. This is apparent with the blur applied to the bridge of the nose. The shallw depth of field should also blur ou the stars in the sky. Currently they are competing for attention.

    Besides that, this is a beatiful piece.

  • Tomiță Militaru

    Tomiță Militaru

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    1 Vote
    Eyelashes

    Posted on Oct 04, 2009 at 8:41 AM

    Too much focus on the eyelashes, I think you should focus more on the eye and the stars.

    A great design though!

  • Matthijs Philip

    Matthijs Philip

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    Make it more realistic

    Posted on Oct 08, 2009 at 10:28 AM

    Apart from this being a really good job, it had me wondering whether or not the globe should be inverted, made smaller, etc. The more I look at the image the less appealing it seems to get.

    I'd go for a little less blur on the nose (increase depth of field), and a little less brightness in the eye. Why aren't there any bright stars closer to the transition from the nose to the sky? There is too much of a black gradient there it seems..

  • Bency Silvester

    Bency Silvester

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    Less stars

    Posted on Oct 08, 2009 at 6:18 PM

    Dull the eyes a bit. too shiny

    • danie ocean
      danie ocean commented:
      Posted: on Oct 08, 2009 at 9:04 PM

      Great design indeed !

      But you need to darken the central part a little bit (little only)because that thing color palette don't goes with all other dark things.

  • Josh Tummel

    Josh Tummel

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    The nose bridge seems kind of odd...

    Posted on Nov 19, 2009 at 12:41 PM

    I'm not sure what it is, but the whole area of the nose on the left seems a little strange. The black space on the right works really well though. I'd also agree that the stars seem kind of fake... adding some color or something might help. Overall I really like this wallpaper though!