Aaran Casey

logo for my design portfolio

By Aaran Casey

   on Sep 30, 2009
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Concept Reviews

  • Robert Benjamin

    Robert Benjamin

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 2
    1 Vote
    Make the fonts clearer!

    Posted on Sep 30, 2009 at 6:42 PM

    This is a interesting design, but the fonts are really unclear and it's hard to read - also, it's rather confusing what the 'p,' 'm,' and 'e' are, and even though I know that they're phone, mobile and email, it took me a couple seconds to have to think it through. More wasted time on the reader's part.

  • Kati Gruzins

    Kati Gruzins

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    Reverse the colors for your contact information

    Posted on Sep 30, 2009 at 7:58 PM

    I like the headline you created for this concept, but I think the "ac" up top overwhelms it just a bit. I can barely make out the tag line, "all you need..."

    I would find no fault at all with this concept if the colors for your contact information were reversed (blue on white vs. white on blue) with text that's a bit easier to read.

  • Tyler Cooper

    Tyler Cooper

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    Small black text

    Posted on Sep 30, 2009 at 8:14 PM

    The small black text under the pink text on my screen is unreadable. I would definitely make that larger as well as the pink box graphic above "creativ"

  • Shane Ernest

    Shane Ernest

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    the thought/comment bubble

    Posted on Oct 01, 2009 at 12:23 AM

    i think the comment bubble is distracting when used more as an accent. your customized type should be able to hold on it's own as a purely typographic mark.

    your tagline is also way too small. . . if anything it should be to the left of the 't's decscender. . . and probably be enlarged a few points. i'd also kick your letter 'v' over a few bits, the kerning is too much in comparison to the 't' and 'i'. .

    the colors are nice and vibrant, very high energy. is that something that represents your business?

    im also concerned about the abbreviations for the telly numbers. . .

    id really focus on the tone and energy behind your company. synthesizing that down should help flesh out new ideas. . .

    enjoy!

  • Marius Stuparu

    Marius Stuparu

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 1
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    font is nice, but not for logo

    Posted on Oct 01, 2009 at 5:07 AM

    It is very hard to read fast (kerning isn'thelping either), and as others have said, p-m-e require too much time to figure out. colours are a bit "strong" too.

  • Aurélie Le Guillou

    Aurélie Le Guillou

    Rank: 7 Student

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    nice font but difficult to read

    Posted on Oct 01, 2009 at 5:58 AM

    not extremely professionals colors

  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

    Rank: 1 Elite

    CF Verified professional

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    Love colors, needs more simplicity

    Posted on Oct 01, 2009 at 7:18 AM

    You have a great color palette going fo ryou here. I would recomend making the fonts a bit simpler or taking away the "ac". I don't think I like the "As You Need" tag line. I think you may be playing off the movie princess bride where he says "as you wish"? However, it just doesn't seem to go well with logo. I think you have some good momentum but you just need to simplify things. Hope this helps.