Velociraptor

Red Raptor Productions header/ logo ideas

By Velociraptor

   on Sep 28, 2009
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  • carl Gholston

    carl Gholston

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    No 3..

    Posted on Sep 29, 2009 at 12:05 PM

    is SICK!! Very nice indeed. As suggested by Rich, work with the image of the raptor. Make it feel just as original as the name. Re-draw/trace or illustrate the pic and make it the color red you have, and the font white. Scale proportionate to your card.

    • Velociraptor
      Velociraptor commented:
      Posted: on Sep 29, 2009 at 6:06 PM

      thanks for the review I was torn between 1 and 3 for a business card but I'll definitely go with 3. if I make the lettering white and the image red should I leave the word 'red' colored red? or turn it to white too?

    • carl Gholston
      carl Gholston commented:
      Posted: on Sep 29, 2009 at 6:12 PM

      leave it red to see how it looks. You just want it to have a uniform look. I'm assuming that on the other side you will have some white text so put "productions" in white.

  • Kiko Gatto

    Kiko Gatto

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    How would it look on white paper/stationary ? Or printed on black and white?

    • Velociraptor
      Velociraptor commented:
      Posted: on Sep 30, 2009 at 2:46 PM

      frankly it looks cooler on black than on white, I don't know what I could do to make it better on white. I tried changing the colors but I really am trying to stick with that dark blood red. any suggestions?

    • Kiko Gatto
      Kiko Gatto commented:
      Posted: on Sep 30, 2009 at 3:55 PM

      I like it on black too, but I just think that sometimes you will face a white background, like on a letter heading. Maybe a red raptor and black text ?

  • N W

    N W

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    simplify

    Posted on Sep 30, 2009 at 11:33 PM

    It doesn't work for me like this. I'd simplify the head a lot. At the moment it doesn't work when it's smaller / from a distance. Also the logo is hard on your eyes. Maybe make the red slightly lighter so it's not so harsh on the black. The yellow & red reminds me of a target / game?

  • Tyler Cooper

    Tyler Cooper

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    Cleaner

    Posted on Sep 29, 2009 at 7:28 PM

    All the illustrations of the raptor are to grungy for my taste. I would clean it up and have an illustration of the full raptor maybe even in flight. Put the raptor illustration medium sized and on the left with the text to the right, two line like in the 3rd example. I would use a different font one that has more character.

  • rich pears

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    Make the raptor red

    Posted on Sep 29, 2009 at 9:58 AM

    Err... maybe a bit obvious, but I would make the image of the raptor RED in whatever style you decide to go for.

    I like the red colour that has been used, and the font is cool - especially when used in the style of the third design. i think the only thing that lets it down is the image of the raptor itself. Maybe it needs to be a bit more 'stampy' like a screen print, and not a photocopy.

    I do like the name too BTW.

  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    cool

    Posted on Sep 28, 2009 at 10:07 PM

    the name is cool... Nice one!

    I like the 3rd one the best, it has that old poster feel.

    What might look pretty cool, is putting the red on the same line as raptor, and right align the text, and next to it a red silhouette of a raptors head..

    all on a black background...

    • Velociraptor
      Velociraptor commented:
      Posted: on Sep 28, 2009 at 10:26 PM

      that's a nice idea i'll try that and update the page with it, by the way can you believe I had to build these entirely in microsoft powerpoint 1999!? my old photoshop doesn't work on my current operating system

    • Aaran Casey
      Aaran Casey commented:
      Posted: on Sep 28, 2009 at 10:35 PM

      what OS are u using? It doesn't surprise me at all, my work computer is a piece of crap... I'd prefer to use my Mac Laptop... but boss says no!

    • Velociraptor
      Velociraptor commented:
      Posted: on Sep 28, 2009 at 11:43 PM

      yeah I'm working in leopard on the newest generation mac and I used to use photoshop 7 but it doesn't run on this. I don't think I want to buy CS2 (don't really like the interface of 4)

    • Aaran Casey
      Aaran Casey commented:
      Posted: on Sep 29, 2009 at 1:27 AM

      yeah third one is awesome just a nice and different style... digging the russian look font