Velociraptor

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By Velociraptor

   on Sep 28, 2009
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  • Nate Hamilton

    Nate Hamilton

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    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 1
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 2
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    Good concept poor execution

    Posted on Sep 29, 2009 at 11:16 AM

    Overall you had me in the concept. I thought the idea of just showing the emotion in the eyes was cool. I definitely think this could have been shot better. I can see the tripod in the reflection of the glasses. Poor shot composition was throughout the piece. Acting was a bit off but all in all you still had my attention until the end. The acting was poor and production value low. You built us up for a great ending but then the ending was not worth the wait.

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  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 2
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    ahhh I get it

    Posted on Sep 28, 2009 at 5:10 PM

    it's a good idea, but cut the end of the movie and keep it so people are using their minds to figure it out, like a flash intro on a website...

    I am intrigued what's next looking forward to the next installment

    • Velociraptor
      Velociraptor commented:
      Posted: on Sep 28, 2009 at 5:18 PM

      thanks for the review Aaran! I'm a little confused by what you mean as the ending. The part where people start talking or where they decide to shoot him?

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    • Aaran Casey
      Aaran Casey commented:
      Posted: on Sep 28, 2009 at 5:20 PM

      yep the part where they start to talk, from there onwards...

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