Tarik Khayat

consumers campaign

By Tarik Khayat

   on Sep 21, 2009
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  • Eric Granata

    Eric Granata

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    #2 Gets My Vote

    Posted on Sep 21, 2009 at 11:28 PM

    The first design is most appealing to me. I dig the textures and colors. However, the second one is easier for me to scan the copy so it might work better for POP.

  • Ryan Margheriti

    Ryan Margheriti

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    great

    Posted on Sep 21, 2009 at 10:18 PM

    first 2 are awesome. for a website i would go A, but considering it is a POP display, B is more suitable. well done.

  • carl Gholston

    carl Gholston

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    Cool

    Posted on Sep 22, 2009 at 8:23 AM

    If I saw like the first 2. The texture in number one draws the attention more. Number two looks like I would walk past it in the supermarket. I also agree with Angela about why the customer needs to be involved in your brand. Too many messages can be confusing. Good job overall!

  • Alan Horne

    Alan Horne

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    #2 for me

    Posted on Sep 22, 2009 at 8:48 AM

    I love all 3, but for an advert its #2 i would use, as the text is far more readable and can be quickly and easily scanned.

    • Velociraptor
      Velociraptor commented:
      Posted: on Sep 28, 2009 at 3:42 PM

      dude I totally agree, number one has it all but that grungy text really out there to tie it all together. I think if you just copypasta'd it though you'd need some sort of dust or ink splatter to make it mesh well. Just as a background or around the edges

  • Rolando Rubalcava

    Rolando Rubalcava

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    Re-Do no.3

    Posted on Sep 23, 2009 at 4:31 AM

    concept 1 and 2 are awesome, 3 is to plain. I would probably use concept one because it has all the info you need in a target area, concept two feels that the viewer needs to scan to gather the info.

  • Yitz Woolf

    Yitz Woolf

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    Combine #1 and #2

    Posted on Sep 22, 2009 at 9:15 AM

    I would take the text from #2 and place it on #1.

    Move the visual of #1 to the right.

    Keep the bottom of #2.

    Can you remove the three guys or replace them with other people - they look depressed or they look like they are taking a piss.

  • Fabio Martins

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    great

    Posted on Sep 22, 2009 at 9:49 AM

    I liked the texture and design of the first, but I found the image of the most unmotivated, the second I found it more cheerful, the most appropriate pictures, estiga more adventure.

  • Coen Wiers

    Coen Wiers

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    URL more up front

    Posted on Sep 22, 2009 at 4:45 AM

    Really love the first two. I have to go with eric that the second one is has a better drive towards the url

  • Angela Koch

    Angela Koch

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    beyond contests

    Posted on Sep 22, 2009 at 4:59 AM

    I have no issue with the look and feel of the comms, it says outdoors, the jeep is the hero, looks good

    My feel is consumers need more than a chance to win something to involve themselves in your brand. Beyond the chance to win a Jeep why am I interested? I also feel you have a lot of messages - Gear Up and Go...Win a Jeep And Dont Stop. Too much for POP messaging.

    How is the Jeep connected to Snickers? Perhaps ask people to take a picture or tell a story of how Snickers can save a life in the outdoors???!!! You get my drift.

    • Tarik Khayat
      Tarik Khayat commented:
      Posted: on Sep 22, 2009 at 5:28 AM

      Thanks Angela, i totally are with you .The activity will have a web site where you need to register and then select your favorite outdoor activity where can use the Jeep and why . will try to make it exciting . For now It will be great if you can tell me which one of the above three option you like the most

    • Angela Koch
      Angela Koch commented:
      Posted: on Sep 22, 2009 at 8:01 AM

      I would say number 3 is the weakest, too subtle for POP POS. Number 2 is good but the reverse angle on the Jeep lacks the directness of number 1 (whihc gets my vote)

  • fernanda engel

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    i don't understand why people turn your back

    Posted on Sep 23, 2009 at 8:12 AM

    THE FIRST definitely is more appealing. The design is very good and the composition look harmonic.

  • Carlos Raya

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    Take care of the other text

    Posted on Sep 23, 2009 at 1:15 PM

    Number 1 is my favorite in design but for POP purposes I think number 2 could work better. Be careful where you put the other text to keep the clearness of the design.

  • Mike Goignan

    Mike Goignan

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    nothing

    Posted on Sep 24, 2009 at 11:08 AM

    The first one is my favourite. The background texture is perfect for the subject, and all the text is clear.

    Nice :-)

  • Dennis Michael

    Dennis Michael

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    nothing

    Posted on Sep 24, 2009 at 4:11 PM

    First concept. Really cool. You may want to increase the size of the snickers a bit. But other than that, I think it's a gooder!

  • Andrew Hucks

    Andrew Hucks

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    The URL on the second one.

    Posted on Sep 24, 2009 at 5:24 PM

    I like the first and second ones. I think the URL on the second one is a little difficult to read, but that may just be me. Personally, I like the design of the first one better, but the second one grabs my attention and tells me what the purpose of the banner is.

  • Sebastian Trappe

    Sebastian Trappe

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    1 and 2 look promising

    Posted on Sep 25, 2009 at 12:47 AM

    No1: +Showcases the Jeep best > Consumer wish to get it + Good design with clean structure - Humans seem like they don't care > misses emotion - shadows could use work

    No2: + good picture, screaming "adventure" + good text elements, like it very much + nice tweak with the tiretrails in the sand in the footer - consumer will also get distracted by the scenery in the background, because the human in the picture looks there - i think if something is a price, it's important to show it from the front

    No3: Doesn't look like it's ready to be reviewed yet. i don't like the font, but i like the picture

    A little advice on POS Marketing: If you have a person on the Picture, it should look into the camera. The "Gear up & Go, Win a Jeep" has to arrive the consumer like a personal message from this person to get him emotional involved. If it doesn't, it's just an ad.

  • Didier POUPRY

    Didier POUPRY

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    no

    Posted on Sep 25, 2009 at 8:23 AM

    It's great, all is ok with the gift

  • James Taylor

    James Taylor

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    I'm diggin' the first one the most. I like it's simplicity and very cool background texture. Would work well on the web too I reckon.

  • Rachel Jefferies

    Rachel Jefferies

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    No2

    Posted on Sep 25, 2009 at 6:18 PM

    I prefer the 2nd one, its more bright and cheery and fun, the composition is more balanced and the snickers stands out more like its a part of theAD

  • Jack Wheeler

    Jack Wheeler

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    2nd one.

    Posted on Sep 25, 2009 at 7:52 PM

    for POP, definitely the second one. Nice dynamic photo and it gets the point across immediately. My instinct is to make the Snickers logo larger, but if it's sitting on top of a Snickers display, that's unnecessary. Nice work.

  • None

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    wow

    Posted on Sep 26, 2009 at 3:01 AM

    love it, nice and simple

  • Maris Bunkovskis

    Maris Bunkovskis

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    .. too blury in some places

    Posted on Sep 26, 2009 at 12:56 PM

    Whoa, i love first two, and if i had to choose i would probably go with the first one. but i think that those guys should turn around and stand with their faces faced to camera. :) the second one is a bit more dinamic and attractive but it seems to me that it kinda sends me a message that the main prize is a trip to desert not a jeep. :)

  • Peter Safwat

    Peter Safwat

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    2nd one is very cool but change font

    Posted on Sep 27, 2009 at 7:52 AM

    I like the 2nd one very much but i think you have to make the font more readable but it's fine if you want to leave it like this

  • Alex Ketch

    Alex Ketch

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    Combine 2 & 3

    Posted on Sep 27, 2009 at 7:26 PM

    Even though I like 2 quite a lot, for me walking in a supermarket or a shop, it's just not eye-catching enough.

    Try taking the best qualities from both and combining them.

    i.e. Large message and easier to find URL from concept 2, and the texture and image from 1.

    Also how about getting combining the messages, to make "Don't Stop. Gear Up & Go". This way you get rid of the fight for attention by all the different messages.

    • p onisama
      p onisama commented:
      Posted: on Sep 28, 2009 at 4:41 AM

      i like the first one, but i think the around arrows more darker better. the chocolate's color is darker..

  • Andy Montoya

    Andy Montoya

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    Background and types

    Posted on Sep 28, 2009 at 3:07 PM

    Hey guy, I think that backrounds needs more unit and tupes isnt talk with the rest of layout, make more interation with layers of work.

    Cya, Andy Montoya

    • Velociraptor
      Velociraptor commented:
      Posted: on Sep 28, 2009 at 3:37 PM

      2nd and third seem to be fitting for a website or some form of 'to the side' advertising. like a bar across the top (after some modification) or a side thing. I don't know if you were planning on expanding the information content of #3 but I don't think it's quite clear enough. Number one I like the best, very aesthetically pleasing, clean and modern I think it allows for a greater variety of use and genre pending some clean up to match each said genre. It really gets the idea across without to much location establishment. I think that lets users fill in themselves and relate to it. Unlike number two which verges on the edge of corniness which is fine if that's what you were going for.

  • Velociraptor

    Velociraptor

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    Third seem to be fitting for a website or some form of 'to the side' advertising - it would need a link or something for it's lack of information. like a bar across the top (after some modification) or a side thing to click on. I don't know if you were planning on expanding the information content of #3 but I don't think it's quite clear enough or engaging. Number one I like the best, very aesthetically pleasing, very tight, clean and modern I think it allows for a greater variety of use and genre pending some clean up to match each said genre. It really gets the idea across without too much location establishment. I think that lets users fill in themselves and relate to it better. Unlike number two which verges on the edge of corniness which is fine if that's what you were going for. number two is like a wall poster, it's really saying 'i'm huge and boom! right in your face' good to start but it needs a reason to be in your face. I see he's happy with his jeep and all he can do with it but it needs to be you're happy with this jeep see what you can do with it. maybe less character developement, I'm not saying go to silhouettes but it's like watching a movie entitled "euphoria without you". lol.

  • Baljit Singh

    Baljit Singh

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    WEll Done

    Posted on Sep 28, 2009 at 11:28 PM

    Well Done!!

    Very good work. Good images used good concept

  • Christopher Hofman

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    I like the clear design and text positioning in 2. Make you want to win a jeep and go!

  • Graphix91

    Graphix91

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    great work

    Posted on Sep 29, 2009 at 10:10 PM

    nice play with colors engagement, typography...... just great.... :)

    • Dawn Gallagher
      Dawn Gallagher commented:
      Posted: on Sep 30, 2009 at 9:24 PM

      I love the colors and textures in designs #1 and #3 and believe these will stand out, while #2 may blend into the store surroundings.

      I realize this is part of a display, but I'm a big believer in 'brand as hero,' which you achieve in #3, while the others look like ads for Jeep. You're still generating consumer impressions with POS, so the focus brand should be in a prominent position in case all you get is a millisecond scan.

      Overall, I would use the layout of #2, with the addition of the Snickers' logo in the headline (as in #3), the images from #1 (agree on replace the guys), make the product shot with 'Don't Stop' tag the same size as the Jeep logo at the bottom, then center the URL info and use a larger font.

      Nice work!

    • Alexander D
      Alexander D commented:
      Posted: on Dec 17, 2009 at 1:21 AM

      Beautiful!