
This concept is a new version of an older concept. View Old Version

This concept is a new version of an older concept. View Old Version
I would go with the bottom one. The way the liquid crosses the different sections of each letter make it cleaner.
If you look at just the 'elixir' text at the top, it looks very busy as compared to the bottom logo.
Also, try making the liquid wave from the tube look like it's continuing onto the text... it's a very small detail, but I believe it will help.
On the new design: I think this is stronger and looks more beaker-like. Also, I like how you lessened the space between tag line and logotype. I was on your site and was impressed by your site layout and your blog postings.
I am curious about something on your site. Why do you not add a resume and education info? I see many designers do this. It makes them look so passed school they don't even need to list it, but I am just curious why.
Thanks for the kind words. The reason I don't post a resume or educational info is that my dream is to add employees to my company and become more of a design firm than just a one guy operation.
Because that is my vision then strategically I need to present myself in that way. I have resume that I can send to people if they ask for it, but so far no one has.
I prefer the bottom one, although I would tweak the "r" and make the dots on the "i" a little bit bigger. I love how the "e" works. The liquid shape also works better on the second one.
Great work!
Really like this. Simple, amusing, and memorable.
This logo has a lot of visual movement. I really like it. Maybe a blue to go with that green.
I think that the concept of the logo its good but you have to play more with the colors , but in general terms i like it's really good.
I like the 2nd one - I like the font better and I like the liquid shape better.
COLOR change grey to bright sky blue?
ALIGN align DESIGN + BRANDING with the beginning of the 'X'
BUBBLES bubbles above the beaker - maybe solid green instead of outline
LETTER I dots larger like Daniel recommended
I like the top, , maybe you can lay around with the font and connect all the letters. The "branding +design" needs better placement.
color and font look fine. I feel the test tube needs to be defined a little more. I know you are trying to distill it down to its essence but its just a feeling I get. Some how I would like to see the top of the tube? Also the tag line looks like it is drifting a little to far to the right. Overall pretty nice though.
But I would change BRANDING + DESIGN to Branding & Design
I prefer the top one - mainly because of the way the green sits in the 'e'. I would make the curve on the green stuff of the e more rounded though.
I like the top one better than the second one as the top one looks more balanced and the flow is smooth whereas in the other one the flow is forced that is what I feel but the design is good
Hi Clayton, I like the playfulness and friendly approach to the logo, as well as the colors and type face you used. The only thing that I kind of wanted to see was the outline of the test tube and making it a little bit smaller, beside that it's pretty good. cheers!
I like the font of the top image, but I like the flow of the liquid in the bottom. I agree with the suggestion that the flow from the test tube should match up with the flow in the lettering.
...but that's just a personal preference. I really like how you get the test tube effect without actually having it there.
I really prefer the more sinusoidal liquid in the bottom example, but I'd raise the liquid level a touch more (not a lot, just a little) on the left edge, so that it's decisively crossing the counter of the e, instead of just skimming the edge.
The dots on the is in the bottom example should definitely be enlarged until they're just wider than the stem. They'll look too small otherwise.
I dig the font in the first one, but I'm a sucker for Museo.
Nice, still not keen on the grey though.
I like the first one better.
Good work.
Thanks for the feedback. I darkened up the grey considerably from the first concept. If not grey what do you suggest? Also by "first one" you mean the one on top? The serif type? Or do you mean the original concept?
Yeah sorry i mean, i like the top design of these 2 the best.
I would like the grey to be more silver, might just be me though. :P
ok, thanks. How do you differentiate between grey and silver. I guess I'm not sure what you mean. Could you give me a rgb or cmyk value?
The color of the liquid was better on the previous attempt in my opinion. Also, for the sans-serif version I'd make the dot over the i's larger or perhaps less rounded (So they wouldn't be a perfect circle) as they seem less prominent than the rest of the text to me.
I think the version you choose depends on the image of your brand. Serif is a bit more classic while sans-serif is more modern. But maybe that's just me :P
Nice work regardless.
neither of the colors are completely accurate. I'm thinking of using pantone 375 but it doesn't display well on screen.
your logo design is nice but people who will see it might wonder what it is you are advertising, branding and designing of what particular product
I like the top font better has more flow, I just wish that you would incorporate the grey into the green test tube icon next to it.
I agree with Alan horne, the dark grey is to dark, maybe incorporate a gradient grey fade to white so that the top of the text looks likes it's fading away similiar to that of your icon, the dots on the i's could also be bubbles.
'branding + design' I would make the negative space between the G and the D the plus symbol thus getting rid of it completely.