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  • jennifer kouyoumjian

    jennifer kouyoumjian

    Rank: 2 Titan

    697

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 5
    2 Votes
    tweaks on bubbles and circles or nothing

    Posted on Sep 16, 2009 at 6:55 PM

    Excellent job on naming and creating and interesting brand for yourself. I love the logo and the liquid.

    I like the creepy color. All placement is perfect.

  • Chris Reynolds

    Chris Reynolds

    Rank: 4 Master

    131

    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
    1 Vote
    White Space

    Posted on Sep 16, 2009 at 7:02 PM

    Awesome logo, great colors. My only critique is that there may be a tad too much white space between "elixir" and "branding + design." Maybe reduce a little bit of that space. Very nice!

    • Clayton Borah
      Clayton Borah commented:
      Posted: on Sep 17, 2009 at 11:14 AM

      I've never heard of such a thing as too much white space. LOL.

  • Travis Sinclair

    Travis Sinclair

    Rank: 2 Titan

    1002

    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    definition around the test tube

    Posted on Sep 16, 2009 at 7:06 PM

    love this! only thing i see (personally) is that the test tube becomes lost in the white as pictured here. if the background colour is different and the tube is white then it'd be fine.

    good job!

  • TJ Miller

    TJ Miller

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

    25

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    I agree a tad too much white space

    Posted on Sep 16, 2009 at 7:12 PM

    I really like it, its original and interesting, the green really caught my eye

  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

    Rank: 1 Elite

    22778

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    branding & design

    Posted on Sep 16, 2009 at 8:34 PM

    I like the logo it's quite original, not too keen on the font of the branding & design I think that if you made the "B&D" float out like the bubble that may make more impact...

  • Angela Koch

    Angela Koch

    Rank: 1 Elite

    583

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    lose the test tube

    Posted on Sep 16, 2009 at 8:53 PM

    i like your simplicity philosophy. I think your name and the flow within the text works. The test tube lacks the simplicity you are looking for, I feel its an appendage you don't need. I would then bring branding and design in under the name. My only other comment is choice of color pairs. The green works but the grey is working less, consider a deeper silver?

    • jennifer kouyoumjian
      Posted: on Sep 16, 2009 at 11:25 PM

      I just want to add that the deeper silver is a good comment which I was thinking of mentioning.

  • Codedude

    Codedude

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 5
    0 Votes
    nothing

    Posted on Sep 17, 2009 at 10:40 AM

    I totally love this concept!!! Only thign that would be a problem is small image size readability

  • Alan Horne

    Alan Horne

    Rank: 3 Superior

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    Change the gray

    Posted on Sep 17, 2009 at 11:15 AM

    Love the design, i just think the gray would look better if it were a little more silver looking.

    I would also suggets the same as most, by bringing in the text below closer.