Brett Allcorn

I'm Selling Green Computers - E-commerce

By Brett Allcorn

   on Jun 03, 2009
5 Reviews4 Votes1 Favorite740 Views

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  • chris sparks

    chris sparks

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 4
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    doesnt fit my monitor settings

    Posted on Jun 03, 2009 at 8:25 AM

    i like the look, feel, style got my attention not too heavy with any aspect well balanced made me check everything

    good job

  • Tommy Picard

    Tommy Picard

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    Scale down the main graphic

    Posted on Jun 05, 2009 at 6:43 PM

    I would scale down the main graphic on your website a bit. I didn't get a call to action on the main graphic without scrolling, which would make me less likely to continue on to the site. Just keep in mind that if your screen is large, the majority of people still are at 1280x960 or so, especially if they are on a lap top looking to upgrade. I would make the bottom of your graphic at the bottom edge of the ELECTRIC BILL text.

    I personally love your logo. It's clean and simple. Just conveying you are selling computers quickly is the key. Great job!

    • brett allcorn
      brett allcorn commented:
      Posted: on Jun 15, 2009 at 3:14 PM

      updated to your suggestions, if you've got time check it out:

      www.myleef.com/savings_2.php

    • Tommy Picard
      Tommy Picard commented:
      Posted: on Jun 15, 2009 at 3:32 PM

      getting much better. you could still afford to even bring the computer up to the left of the "time to reduce your electric bill" and get a hint of those boxes at the bottom up on a monitor. i'm on a macbook & the computer image gets cut off when i visit the site.

      good job on the updates though!

  • Cameron Reynolds-Flatt

    Cameron Reynolds-Flatt

    Rank: 2 Titan

    100

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 2
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    Nice

    Posted on Jun 14, 2009 at 5:06 PM

    I think over all the design is solid. I agree with the comments above. The home graphic is to big and can be sized down...(maybe just get rid of that top leaf graphic)

    I also feel like the 3 main sections on the bottom need some type of rollover.

    As far as sales go...I think your honestly in a tough market...I don't how much advertising you have invested in...but thats where I would start.

    I think you really have to emphasize and some how convince customers to go with your machine rather then a dell, etc.

    Good Job!

    • brett allcorn
      brett allcorn commented:
      Posted: on Jun 15, 2009 at 3:13 PM

      Totally agree with the frontpage layout and the rollover

      I updated @ www.myleef.com/savings_2.php

  • Miroslav Mazel

    Miroslav Mazel

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    Gain a reputation

    Posted on Jun 15, 2009 at 3:05 PM

    I like the look of it. In my experience, I and the people I know tend to buy either in person or at trusted places online. Perhaps you could add a "reviews" section with reviews from trusted online sources and customers for credibility. Or you could try stressing to your customers how important it is that they recommend you to others. I think Leef just needs to become a bigger name. P.S. Maybe you could add an Ubuntu Linux option (I would opt for that) -- that won't cost you anything.

    • brett allcorn
      brett allcorn commented:
      Posted: on Jun 15, 2009 at 3:12 PM

      I wanted to add Ubuntu, would have been cool for internet street cred, but unfortunately my supplier only adds Vista and XP :(

      I agree with the credibility thing. I guess I'm just hoping it looks as professional as possible and that helps.

  • sarveshen govender

    sarveshen govender

    Rank: 6 Apprentice

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 5
    • Engagement: 5
    0 Votes
    Product Range

    Posted on Aug 12, 2009 at 4:11 AM

    I love the design and the functionality. It's simple and it guides a customer through every process, even the upgrading process. Kudos with that. However I do think that people would like more variety. Customers want choice but not to be overwhelmed. If you could look at a few other manufacturers that do green products: HP or Dell maybe?