Ben Parlier

Ad Banner for snorgtees.com

By Ben Parlier

   on Aug 27, 2009
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Concept Reviews

  • Creative Underdog

    Creative Underdog

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    121

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
    1 Vote
    Maybe play with rotation speeds?

    Posted on Aug 28, 2009 at 8:28 AM

    I think this concept is a lot better than the skyscraper ad. I think it works as is, but if I had to change something, I'd maybe try experimenting with different rotation speeds with some motion blur. Perhaps add some easing into the tween. It also seems to be only 11 seconds from start to finish. No harm in stretching it out 4 more seconds to take up all 15. Other than that, I like it, Good job.

    • Ben Parlier
      Ben Parlier commented:
      Posted: on Aug 28, 2009 at 8:42 AM

      Yeah, I agree about the 15 sec. thing. Honestly, I don't even think this is the final design I gave. I wanted it to be slow, so as to be able to see the design. And, I had a "click here" or some other indicator above the logo, which is what the user clicks to visit the site. Thanks for the feedback - much appreciated.

  • Joel Acevedo

    Joel Acevedo

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    1574

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    1 Vote
    It's an ok ad

    Posted on Aug 29, 2009 at 5:14 PM

    Not bad! I know you are limited on these ads, so I won't be so harsh on you. :)

    It's not WOW but not bad either. I honestly don't know what else to say.