Travis Sinclair

poster for my office

By Travis Sinclair

   on Aug 27, 2009
6 Reviews1 Vote0 Favorites336 Views

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  • Paul-Georg Majev

    Paul-Georg Majev

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    funny

    Posted on Aug 27, 2009 at 1:44 PM

    I find it kind of funny :-)

    • Travis Sinclair
      Travis Sinclair commented:
      Posted: on Aug 27, 2009 at 4:30 PM

      i posted this for the hell of it. this one is toned down from the first version i did....it was also entitled "the evolution of woman", but the third picture was a modern human skull with no teeth and handle bars (figure it out) my wife threatened me with divorce if i included it a past art show. the original idea still makes me hurt from laughter when i see it.

  • Ben Parlier

    Ben Parlier

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    Great!

    Posted on Aug 27, 2009 at 8:30 PM

    I read the post you . . . well, posted about the original having no teeth and handle bars! My only suggestion is to make the skull's head flat - for a beer or remote. other than that....I like your style!

    • Travis Sinclair
      Travis Sinclair commented:
      Posted: on Sep 06, 2009 at 7:58 AM

      http://xhuman.deviantart.com/art/Evolution-of-Woman-136078663

      the 'uncensored' version

  • Joel Acevedo

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    Trim/cut the face of woman to match the skulls

    Posted on Aug 29, 2009 at 6:50 PM

    HAHA! This is funny stuff. Good work. Trim/cut the face of woman to match the skulls and make it larger.

    I also noticed the skulls and picture are not horizontally aligned the right way (as the "evolution of woman" is).

  • Amy Feger

    Amy Feger

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    white leaf in corner

    Posted on Aug 30, 2009 at 2:03 PM

    Hi! This one drew a laugh! Good one. I agree with the above comment on cutting out the background of the woman to match the rest. and using matching type across for all descriptions.

    I was taught not to decorate for the heck of it. So, personally I would would make that white leaf in the upper corner and frame darkened to draw less attention to it and more to the central images. I think if you brightened up "the evolution of woman" a bit it would be a "wow" poster!

    Great idea... it is inspiring!

  • Felipe Ramirez

    Felipe Ramirez

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    La imagen de la mujer

    Posted on Aug 27, 2009 at 2:28 AM

    Me gusta la idea pero cambiaría la foto de la mujer por una mas acorde con el diseño.

  • goldeni ganesh

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    not so...

    Posted on Aug 27, 2009 at 11:19 AM

    you can do more :) all the best