Concept Reviews
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Nothing much except the Header font.
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I know nothing about sports, but it seems like the interest in the multi-armed figure would be greater without the transparent portrait in the back. Interesting concept, though!
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Id3sign commented:I was thinking that too. Funny part is I don't even do sports myself lol.
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Visual is great, but why does he need to have his back to us? If he is facing us then dont need the 2nd image. Also I dont get the buddha thing?
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Id3sign commented:
Those were the images I gotten. Well the back turned one had only 2 arms. I put the other two there.
For the Buddha thing it was the only worship like figure with more than just 2 arms. But I think I will make him his own God & kill the Buddha title.
Might go with NBA Vishnu
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I actually really like it but I woul change the font and maybe even the font colour :)
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Id3sign commented:
Thanx everyone for the feedback. I have a clients site to work on, because I finally figured out the layout a bit, so it will be sometime, before I touch this again. I will keep you all up-to-date thoa.
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ok, i like this, but the one and only thing that screams out to me (personally) is that it's called 'nba buddha', which is ok, but the multi-armed man instantly (since now my mind has been turned to religious figures) makes me think of the Hindu god/goddess with six arms. buddha only had two arms. this would drive me nuts if it were mine, but my brain is whacked and no one else may give it a second thought.....so don't place too much stock in my opinion.....but it is a good design.
hope this helps- if not, just forget you read it!
good luck!
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jennifer kouyoumjian commented:You are right Travis, Buddha and the arms are a mis-match, but maybe I missing something, I like basketball, but am not up on it at all. There is also a King James reference in here too.
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Nothing except maybe something in his top left hand. Other then that it looks good.
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i like almost everything but what i find a little strange is that when you see the shoulders of the guy.. the upper left arm is behind the 2nd left arm while the upper right arm is in front of the lower right arm.. i dont know if i make myself clar. hope you anderstand ) thats the only things i find strange.
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Id3sign commented:
Yea, I see what you mean now. I can work on that when I touch it again.
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Kyle Stiers commented:I agree with Felipe that the arms need to be swapped, but other then that some better and more intriguing typography for the header and its ALL GOOD!
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I agree with Felipe that the arms need to be swapped, but other then that some better and more intriguing typography for the header and its ALL GOOD!
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The bottom left arm looks weird.
The typeface also needs some work. Make it more dynamic. :)
Everything else looks great!
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From a design standpoint, although some of the tangents are attractive, as a whole things seem a bit disjointed. Concept is solid, but the execution needs a bit of tweaking.
For one, I'd center the 'Buddha-James' image. Perhaps even position the camera lower in the shot to allow for a larger blow-up, and even greater larger-than-life POV
I'm not at all 'getting' the lettering/whatever to the left in red. I'd nix it entirely.
With LeBron's face being so recognizable now, I'd enlarge that to entirely fill the frame, in the same ghosted-back technique.
And lastly, I would center the "NBA BUDDHA" text/headline, just above his head. I'd also do it on one line, and at least one-half, if not one-third as large.
Let's see more.
I know i need to fix dat a bit