Concept Reviews
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check deviant art for a photoshop brush pack called rising sun.
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I think one of the problems with the rays is that they taper to a point within the canvas, esp. the left side. You could make the sunburst shape larger, and fade out the rays using a radial gradient on a layer mask (in PS, obv), and that may fix it. Maybe.
Otherwise, everything looks good- slightly cluttered, but in a content-rich way.
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I really like the idea and the design on a whole but you are right about the sun rays.
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Id3sign commented:Thanx everyone for your feedback. I think if I practice on the rays more I should have it down pack. I will also check out those sites/links.
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The brand association to twitter is very nice, using their login page for inspiration was a good idea, it instantly feel familiar as soon as you look at it.
Nice idea, nice work.
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I feel it's too much confused and i don't like the sun, is irreal. The bottom part u really need to put all that things? make @iD3SIGNandCo smaller it's disturbing
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I like it... but the footer (blue section) looks crowded. Everything else looks amazing to me.
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Overall, it's pretty original and good looking. The coordinates at the bottom seem to be too close to the card, if you move those down a bit, it will be pretty perfect in my opinion.
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I don't know if this is an exact replica of the page twitter... if it is please excuse comments...
Personally, I would Line up the line "Follow and discover with the top of the w, e, and r in twitter...that line is the strongest line for alignment. The type seems a bit big in the search box... I would take out the little pound marks before the smaller detail words. corporate and identity need a space between them, as well as, twitter and backgrounds... The P is too close to the colon looks like it's touching it (in front of the phone #).
Other than that, awesome concept!
