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Concept Reviews
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The 2 words are disconnected in your composition. Perhaps you need to find a link between the words and that wold give birth to a central thought behind the composition. I have difficulty reponding to the elements seperately. Here's a thought, what if the eye's were incubating?
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I wasn't in on the original review, but my first thought when looking at this piece is that the mask is too smooth. It looks like you might've applied the mask as a solid color with transparency--but the rest of the piece has so much more texture and depth. Just a thought!
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Try doing a large eye but the corner of it becomes an umbilical cord or something?
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One of my concerns is the font on the upper right side. If it's not meant to be readable then just go with the reviews before this. If it's meant to be readable and will be in your portfolio I say work on it. a bit unless you will have the title somewhere else in fine print.
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This is pretty interesting all together. The colors are great! The three things I find a tinge awkward about is first, the transparency of the hair when it goes from the right half of this picture to the left. The left side I feel needs to have the same background behind only the hair as it does on the right side. It draws my attention away from everything else. (Maybe it's just me.)
I do like what you did to the type on the left, it fits the poster...yet, I have no idea what it says because it is too distorted.. So, don't know what to say there.
The lack of white in the eyes of this masked individual kinda takes attention to the eyes in the wrong direction, if you make the eyes have white, it will pop ( just like that little guy on the left bottom corner.) Maybe fade the white in the corner and add some white in the cord (this will link the white in the eyes to the incubation through color.) just a suggestion.
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