Jose Rauda

Economic Development

By Jose Rauda

   on Aug 18, 2009
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  • Szymon Niemczura

    Szymon Niemczura

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 5
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 3
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    Generaly, not much!

    Posted on Aug 21, 2009 at 1:44 PM

    Design is really clean and smart. There are some details I would consider to enhance.

    1. Menu font looks a bit crowded, to tightly spaced.

    2. Contact us / site map / links - Would be fantastic to add some nice and crisp icons.

    3. Newsletter box could be more eye-catching

    4. Typo in the big banner (especially those 4 vertical shaded links) is a bit hard to read. Maybe sanserif would be nicer?

    All in all really good design! I'm sure the client will love it! Good luck!

    • Jose Rauda
      Jose Rauda commented:
      Posted: on Aug 21, 2009 at 2:15 PM

      Thanks so much for your comments. I will definitely apply them! Thanks again!

  • Jeanne

    Jeanne

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    Character spacing in menus too tight

    Posted on Aug 23, 2009 at 2:52 PM

    I agree that the character spacing could be not so tight. Another font choice might also fix that.

    The Contact Us and Sitemap/Links seems just kind of "stuck on". Is there maybe another way to incorporate it into the navigation?

    Other than that minor adjustment, it is a very well done site, both in organization of content, of which there seems to be a lot, and the overall design.

  • Ivanjay Jay

    Ivanjay Jay

    Rank: 4 Master

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    header

    Posted on Aug 31, 2009 at 11:58 PM

    Good work, i love these design and just a little advice, in header there are a lot of empty space.

  • Mark Ong

    Mark Ong

    Rank: 2 Titan

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
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    Just some further details

    Posted on Sep 02, 2009 at 12:45 PM

    The background image is cut off too abruptly. Bleed it up more and fade it out.

    The icon set is too casual (and too common and overused). Try looking for a more professional looking set.

    The panels on the right column seems to have lost their header text. The placement and design of the header text there needs to be better incorporated into its related content.

    Lastly, the yellow highlight in the footer has too much padding. Keep it simple with roughly 2px - 3px padding all around.