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Hi Ionut, i REALLY liked the logo, its really beautiful, although the kind of service that the company provides doesn`t have anything related to the logo.
The front is great, really harmonic and good looking.
The back is just regular, the vertical logo didn`t work for me, it seens to break all the layout. I really think that you should work more on the back part, make something diferent more engaging. Also the red is overloading it.
Just my opinion! But I see a lot of potencial in this card.
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You have a nice logo, classic and simple and you should use it more to your advantage.
My suggestions would be: 1) Use the font treatment you already have for the name/position from the logo. Center and All Caps the name, put the position centered under it with the lines on the side. How the contact info is organized would need to be played with likely in this case. You could basically use a style for the back that mirrors the front logo, except without the top graphic, and with the contact info floating below.
2) Using a mirroring style as I described in (1) would probably make the red bar go away ideally, but if not, I would make the red bar on the back thinner and use just the top graphic/line turned vertical, possibly overlapping with the white area (use the line you have created already in some way for that.
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Love this design!
- the color,
- the typography it's regal, rich, tasteful and so well balanced
I love it!
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Hi Ionut, I really like this business card on top. Its just like the logo you designed, simple yet elegant. However, for the back I would like to see something with the background of the top side, the one on top, with the need to know information on there. Or a white background would do. Overall, this is really good and I think your going on a good designer streak here.
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Ionut Resetar commented:I I wanted to work on white only and have on the other side the logo on that brown/burgundy color. didn't liked it so I that for now adding on the side a smaller version and next to it the content should do.
I look forward to work on this but right now I don't have time, so I will probably make some changes in January.
Thanks for the review mate.
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This card really stands out. I like the logo, font and simplicity on the back (top image)
I'm on the fence with the vertical logo on the front. I like that it is unexpected and different, but it does really break up the layout and makes the white part a big square. What about using just the top ornament part of the logo with horizontal lines?
I also think the name and position might look better centered.
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good one, I really like it.. But you should maybe add some more info like location... and maybe website?
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Ionut Resetar commented:
well if you are in Europe I think we can arrange something, but only if you buy for at least 10.000 euros :D.
Thanks for the review, I will add some location, there is no website at the moment but will come in short time.
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Hey Lonut... I like the front but I think you could try a bit more hard on the back :)
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Ionut Resetar commented:
yeah, I will, this was done very quick and I have printed a couple because we had none :D and the store is open.
Thanks Haider.
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Very nice layout and use of color. I'd probably drop the ":"'s after Tel and E-mail to keep with the clean look.
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I liked the overall appearance, but i think the way the subject is treated is not that new and orginial .. i wont differentiate any classic furniture store from this one. try to be more innovative but keep ur classy and classic touch to it ... if this is not possible in the logo u could be more original in the business card .. in case the customer is ok with that ..
hope i wasnt rude .. i have good intentions.
Good luck !
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First of all...esti roman(chiar ma bucur);the design of the cover it's quite nice, I can't say nothing bad about it becuase it's simple and straight-forward.
But for the second part of the business I suggest to add a furniture!Use the A design for this:simpler said remove that red part and do like this:First put Molnar Stefana to the top!Then add a furniture(that is monochromatic) to the middle, then add the Tel and Email to the bottom.(a space bettwenn top and bottom should be left for a better visual understanding.
The background od the second part of the card should be white because the cover is again minimalist and quite nice.
Now if you do the A design you should have a pyramid at the final.The title should have the width smaller than the furniture and the tel and email should be bigger in width than the furniture.
Contact me if you want to personally create that for you!
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Thanks Vitor, But why do you say the logo has nothing to do with the service that the company provides, we sell classic furniture, the ornament is something similar with sculptures we have on the furniture.
I agree with the back(that's the front actually :), the back is the big logo on dark red/burgundy ). I just can't find a good idea here, I have tried a lot of thinks and didn't liked them.