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Maloney on Marketing Blog

By Chris Maloney

   on Nov 25, 2010
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  • Michael Rawlins

    Michael Rawlins

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 1
    5 Votes
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    What's good:

    • the blog visual metaphor is successful
    • scrolling to content doesn't seem appear to get in users way.
    • Some of the Sub-titles seem persuasive (example: Save 40% on my Fitness... ) but could go further to engage users

    Where are the opportunities for increased conversion:

    1. Introduce time sensitive deals (scarcity) - which tend to strengthen message (and influence visitors to pay attention)
    2. Make it more visually evident that "clicking on the Bookstore object" - will navigate the visitor away from their current location.
    3. Explore other background color treatments for the right-hand side modules. They compete with each other - and become difficult to read.
    4. Strengthen the top NavBar - it seems weak in contrast to the black backgrounds of the content modules.
    5. Deal with visitor objections of buying a book from this site versus a BN.com by using cognitive dissonance. Cognitive dissonance is central to many forms of persuasion to change beliefs, values, attitudes and behaviors (it means, that people are holding two conflicting concepts in their mind at the same time). Focus on the needs of the users to "interact" in a blogging environment to change users mindset about the value of a blog site - versus the BN ecommerce model. Play up the intimacy of the site - and the quality of the content (along with a targeted collection of books).

    The most powerful user experiences leverage these type of persuasive norms.

    Overall - an interesting site...

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    • http://www.maloneyonmarketing.com
      • 1Too large

      • 2Create a visual navigational cue

        If clicking on this object - the user navigates somewhere else, you need a more visually evident control that indicates that action.

      • 3Not Necessary

        You can eliminate

    • Haider Ali
      Haider Ali commented:
      Posted: on Nov 30, 2010 at 2:14 AM

      Wow!! great one

    • Thomas Reen
      Thomas Reen commented:
      Posted: on Dec 02, 2010 at 12:58 AM

      Nice one!!

    • Chris Maloney
      Chris Maloney commented:
      Posted: on Dec 05, 2010 at 9:22 PM

      Thanks Michael, great feedback and I will try to put this into use, particularly the scarcity principle. I talk a lot about it in marketing circles but need to put it into practice for my blog

  • Alex Colina

    Alex Colina

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    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 1
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
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    Just get the design done

    Posted on Nov 29, 2010 at 6:39 PM

    Chris, Listen to your instinct. Address the design. If you are going to talk marketing you must look the part. Michael's advice is dead-on, but you need to focus on design. Do yourself a favor and good designer or go to a really good template site like theme forest but even then ask a true designer to implement it.

    AFTER YOU HAVE DONE THAT...forget the design.

    Focus on two things: Your Brand and your Product.

    Your brand?is your name and likeness. Your Product? your success

    People in your field want to know how you did it, what is your philosophy, your opinions, not so much about funny branding UNLESS you take the opportunity to use that item to highlight one of the ideas that made you successful. In short all contents should be about this. Fitness tips? how did that help you. Actually you should give that book away to anyone who subscribes to your email list. Imagine ads in other sites: FREE Fitness tips for internet marketers! WOW!! you will get boatloads of traffic! The book section? Scrap it! just review one book a week or month. Explain why it fits your philosophy. Why it helped you be successful and provide a helpful link to your affiliate program. In other words STOP SELLING....you will sell more that way.

    • Haider Ali
      Haider Ali commented:
      Posted: on Nov 30, 2010 at 2:20 AM

      Hey Alex... great and in-depth review of all Chris need.

      You won!!

    • Alex Colina
      Alex Colina commented:
      Posted: on Nov 30, 2010 at 6:06 AM

      Thanks Haider!!!

    • Thomas Reen
      Thomas Reen commented:
      Posted: on Dec 02, 2010 at 12:57 AM

      You won!!

    • Chris Maloney
      Chris Maloney commented:
      Posted: on Dec 05, 2010 at 9:33 PM

      Thanks for the feedback Alex, I have to work with templates so I will try to find one that is more visually engaging, and work on my content.

  • Prashant Dubey

    Prashant Dubey

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    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 2
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    Needs some serious work...

    Posted on Nov 26, 2010 at 1:41 AM

    Hi Chris...

    Coming straight to the point, following are my views:

    1. It Needs an Identity!! No logo or Symbol present, which sometimes might send wrong signals to visitors. Its better to have one.

    2. The use of black color here is not very good. Try considering some vibrant colors. This looks very dull.

    3. Add some introduction, a welcome message. Site remains incomplete without that.

    4. The titles with links and text of body are of same color. Try differentiating them. Will add some distinction visually!

    I hope you find the feedback useful.

    All the best Chris!

    Regards, Prashant

    • Haider Ali
      Haider Ali commented:
      Posted: on Nov 30, 2010 at 2:15 AM

      too the points...

    • Prashant Dubey
      Prashant Dubey commented:
      Posted: on Nov 30, 2010 at 2:21 AM

      Well, yeah, to the too many points :-))

    • Haider Ali
      Haider Ali commented:
      Posted: on Nov 30, 2010 at 10:10 AM

      :)

    • Chris Maloney
      Chris Maloney commented:
      Posted: on Dec 05, 2010 at 9:23 PM

      Thanks Prashant, i agree with you re the logo and the black and will get onto trying to find a template that helps with the other stuff

  • Michelangelo Cremona

    Michelangelo Cremona

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    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 2
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    Theme design

    Posted on Nov 26, 2010 at 8:07 AM

    Hello Chris, I'm sorry but I anticipate that I use Google translator, this to avoid hurt me understand what I say. I saw you talk about marketing and I think I understand that you are not at all happy with your site but I think vice versa for the contents. Well, I think, 'personal idea' that the colors are not appropriate for the content that your site has, for the austere black is my idea would require a mixture of colors to increase the desire to retain your visitor to read interesting content. I believe that the header of the post is very invasive and the description is too long. I'll post 'points up what I mean. In addition I would like to tell you that I would agree to change WP theme, I should visit this page, here is everything you need to know to optimize a control panel with your WP Theme .I gave a simple idea and so I hope I saw your great commitment Essert state aid. Best Regards Michelangelo

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    • http://www.maloneyonmarketing.com
      • 1Logo

        Do not have a logo showing a fingerprint to your work commitment!

      • 2Static, not to be

        Maybe you should find a solution inspired by a single performance of the various elements in slideshow.

      • 3Header Title

        The heading font is too large as

      • 4To avoid

        Since then this results in an 'other page I think it makes sense to only small taste, I think the anticipation is too long

      • 5Layout color background

        The black color as I first anticipated nell'itruduzione in my view is austere and mild

    • Chris Maloney
      Chris Maloney commented:
      Posted: on Dec 05, 2010 at 9:24 PM

      Thanks Michelangelo, I will take these ideas on board

  • Haider Ali

    Haider Ali

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    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 1
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    you need to hire a designer!!

    Posted on Nov 27, 2010 at 3:15 AM

    Hi Chris,

    Let's talk about the visuals... it's really a pain (I think using "not engaging" would not be an appropriate word for your blog design) for me to stay on it... skim the content and get to know what best I can get out of this blog.

    As you stated you have visitors but not converting into leads and the reason is it's a great landing page from the SEO/SMO perspective and it's more likely to come in search and get visitors... and let me explain what happen when a user land on the page... first five second of eye interaction makes the visitor an absconder because it's doesn't have any engaging stuff.

    Few of my suggestion:

    • introduce some nice colors
    • get rid of the black background from the right panel and come with some alternative colors... may be a light grey will work.
    • use listing view as grid view end up creating white(blank) space
    • get a logo
    • HIRE A DESIGNER

    I did a quick wire frame of your header section to give and idea that how it could be managed in more aesthetic way.

    Hope this helps.

    Thanks, Haider

    • header changes....bmp

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    • http://www.maloneyonmarketing.com
      • 1What could make a user to click through...

        Heading underneath the store thumbnail does't make sense... it should go above the thumbnail so that user can get involve and start relating the thumbnail with the heading. "Introducing the new Maloney on Marketing Bookstore" Does this heading have anything to do with a visitor? I think... No, it's not! Also, I think you can add couple more line of description along with your heading and sharing your personal view/fact that how it helped you and why one should prefer it.

      • 2need a logo

      • 3light up the navigation

        light up the navigation so that it could be noticeable

      • 4merge it with the "Subscribe by Email section"

        merge it with the "Subscribe by Email section" I think number of readers it will give user more confident if they wish to subscribe.

      • 5use list view to avoid the white space..

    • Chris Maloney
      Chris Maloney commented:
      Posted: on Dec 05, 2010 at 9:29 PM

      Thanks Haider, I agree with your feedback and I will do my best to implement it. Thanks for doing up the wireframes too, it looks perfect. But please keep in mind that I am putting the blog on here because I cant afford to hire a designer ($500+) for a blog that I run for free, I have to work with the wordpress templates that are available.

  • Oksana

    Oksana

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    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
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    too much black!

    Posted on Nov 27, 2010 at 11:52 AM

    Hi there! As for me, it's too much black on the right!!! Would try different color or blend another color with it. Some little things - logo (?) , "Search" button is higher then white search box, blue (?) frame on your photo. "Similar Items" button just doesn't work for me, don't like where it is and how it looks like. Good luck! :)

    • Thomas Reen
      Thomas Reen commented:
      Posted: on Dec 02, 2010 at 12:59 AM

      You will get too many points !!

    • Chris Maloney
      Chris Maloney commented:
      Posted: on Dec 05, 2010 at 9:29 PM

      Thanks Oksana, agree with your points and will do my best to implement

  • Vitor Marcellino

    Vitor Marcellino

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    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 1
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    Draft

    Posted on Nov 30, 2010 at 7:07 AM

    Hey Chris, I can`t see any motivation to subscribe to your blog, findind the subscription box was hard, just like the bookstore link. You should try to use some colors here to give attention to the right sections. Adding contrast would also make your blog more interesting.

    I really think the layout organization is good, but it needs to call user attention.

  • Benjamin Evans

    Benjamin Evans

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    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 1
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    GIVE USERS A REASON TO SIGN UP!

    Posted on Nov 30, 2010 at 11:22 AM

    I like the design, and totally agree with the aforementioned comments by other users, the main issue with this site (in terms of increasing sign ups) is that you: 1. don't draw enough attention to the sign up form. because it looks the same as most of the other sidebar content it's easy to ignore, 2. Most importantly: you don't give the user any reason to sign up!! talk to the user in terms of the 'benefits to signing up' not just 'features'. Features are boring, Benefits tell me how the information you will send me will positively impact my life. If you want my email address, give me a compelling reason to sign up to your newsletter.

    At the moment, your value preposition is basically:

    > 'sign up and i'll fill your inbox > with stuff that you may/may not want'.

    there's no value. why do i(or any other user) want your spam? even if you wrote something overly "sales'y" like:

    > Sign up Today and receive my free > ebook: "10 ways to market you business > that will destroy your competition and > make you a millionaire "

    There would be some kind of implied value to signing up. You need to motivate your users to take action.

    The issue is not with your design , it's more to do with a lack of understanding about the psychology of signing up, and motivators behind human behavior. check out these resources:

    Psychology http://www.slideshare.net/bokardo/designing-for-sign-up http://www.peachpit.com/articles/article.aspx?p=1216150 http://dzineblog.com/2010/10/10-tips-to-design-effective-newsletter-sign-up-forms.html http://blog.guykawasaki.com/2008/01/the-art-of-the.html#axzz16muj4p00

    Design http://webdesignledger.com/inspiration/interface-design-loginsignup http://webdesignledger.com/inspiration/interface-design-loginsignup http://www.smashingmagazine.com/2008/07/04/web-form-design-patterns-sign-up-forms/