Jill

Fly Fishing Logo

By Jill

   on Oct 26, 2010
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  • Jamie Telin

    Jamie Telin

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    Second one...

    Posted on Oct 29, 2010 at 3:02 AM

    Definitely second logo. Why? First one has too much going on. Colors feels off and there is no clear direction. Third one has same problems as first.

    But second one is actually stylish. Perhaps i would cut of a bit from the Y in Fly so the logo dosent stretch so much, there is a lot of space underneath it with nothing.

    Perhaps the bug could use some work. Make it simpler. Simplify. :)

  • Jamie Linder

    Jamie Linder

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    Wow - this is really a great start!

    Posted on Oct 26, 2010 at 8:45 PM

    I really, really like what you've done here.

    The illustration (8) on the first one is very engaging, but I hadn't a quick understanding of what was going on, I think in part due to the lack of other clues in the typography.

    The next sample (9) the "Fly" font has nailed it. It feels as if it has the movement, the quick snap of a fly fisherman's real, and the subtle hook on the descender brings it home. The color of the word Fly reminds me of a water color, which is also good.

    I think you can drop the third one in comparison to the first two, though it looks like it attempts what I was about to suggest: can you combine the colorful fly illustration with the flowing "Fly" text? I don't think the execution on the third one is optimal, but I think the concept is closer.

    You may also want to consider a few versions with water elements such as ripple, reflection, sunlight, etc. Perhaps even some element of geography from the region Klamath as subtle touch. Though, perhaps that will make it too heavy, there's a certain lightness to everything thats working well now.

    The fly illustration looks really close, and I think it may do well to polish up the angles and spaces on those colors; would love to see those flow as well as the "Fly" text. Perhaps too the position of the little "feet" could do with more thought.

    The text "Klamath County" I think sits the best in examples (9) and (10).

    There are great parts to each of these designs, and I would love to see the best of those parts all combine into one awesome design.

  • Ittikorn Saengchuenthanom

    Ittikorn Saengchuenthanom

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    Second one

    Posted on Oct 27, 2010 at 10:52 AM

    I like the second design, the word "Fly" it look like it gonna fly away, and also the color that you use in logo is matched the design. 5-Star :D

    • Michelangelo Cremona
      Posted: on Oct 30, 2010 at 2:32 PM

      Congratulations on your drawing flycatchers9. I was wondering if the fly is resting on the edge of the fishing rod, if that's what you mean to me you full marks. To fly to put anything positive votes, color to be revised to make more 'this nice Congratulations!

  • Ionut Resetar

    Ionut Resetar

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    very nice start

    Posted on Oct 29, 2010 at 5:24 AM

    second one it's nicer. Very nice colors, I think they need a bit more detail on the fly to be finished.

  • Abdul-Hadi Hawari

    Abdul-Hadi Hawari

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    Absolutely the second one...

    Posted on Oct 29, 2010 at 9:55 PM

    It's very nice and have such a lovely colors ...

    but I think you should work a little bit on improving:

    • the butterfly
    • the "Y" in fly ...
    • the order of your text "KLAMATH COUNTRY", "catchers" i think you may swap them or something.

    that's all for me..

    Good Luck

  • Michelangelo Cremona

    Michelangelo Cremona

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    => flycatchers9 <=

    Posted on Oct 30, 2010 at 2:32 PM

    Congratulations on your drawing flycatchers9. I was wondering if the fly is resting on the edge of the fishing rod, if that's what you mean to me you full marks. To fly to put anything positive votes, color to be revised to make more 'this nice Congratulations!

  • Tiago Duarte

    Tiago Duarte

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    Really good!

    Posted on Oct 30, 2010 at 5:40 PM

    I pick the 1st picture as the best logo that is amazing!

    The fly adds a sense of movement to the whole thing and the colors are really well thought.

    There's something i'd change though: the yellow in "fly" to a green or something.

    • Jill
      Jill commented:
      Posted: on Oct 31, 2010 at 2:13 PM

      the reason I chose yellow is for the specific kind of fly they use in this area is yellow. But I kinda agree with the green, we'll see what they want I guess.

  • Amber Turner

    Amber Turner

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    Logo 2

    Posted on Jan 07, 2011 at 5:35 PM

    Logo 2 is my favorite one. I feel it is most professional, clean and interesting. The third one, that font is overused and the first one the font isn't really interesting for what you are working on.

    I would say logo 2, hands down.