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I think it is nice, but it looks just a little templatish. Just maybe add you own jazz to it.
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This looks to me like a terrific marketing message searching for a suitable delivery mechanism. It's just too bland. Completely contradicts the claim in the bottom right para: this is a textbook me-too website template.
Or if this is the full extent of the creativity displayed using the "stylish" system, modify the language and change the claim.
The blue is cliched and overused in similar presentations. I suggest cleaning up the header colour or changing it completely. The serif type is a good match, but that clunky sans kills it.
Put some people into the secondary graphics. They will help with the personality transplant. Use a common angle for the cropped images.
But it is well written. Hope this helps.
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Clean work.... Few suggestions : 1. Header need to more impressive. Like plane blue bg cudn't work much... u can add some faded image related to the same. or some swirls or anything... 2. Please make "free demo" button more impressive, add some icon or bullet on it. Same like "learn more" button 3. Below 3 images are ok.. but if u put some shadow treatment(down), i think that will give more effective look. 4. What's that black box on top left? is it for logo? 5. treat footer area well.. you have lots of space over there... 6. Over all good attempt :) Gud luck :)
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You have the odds against you. People expect a kick-ass design from a service that basically sells a design tool. I have to agree with others, although the design tries to mimic successful modern design patterns, it fails to deliver as a whole.
It needs more originality, spice in order to be authentic. Content wise it is fine by the way.
