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Hi Vincent,
1st off, I like the overall design but there are 2 things that really stick out for me that I think could do with some changing. The 1st thing is the navigation for the image slider, those arrows really don't fit in with the site and the white used for them could be changed to match the border and scaled down to maybe just " > " on either side ..
2nd - the logo, Im not too sure on the glow used, I think you could use no glow and maybe add some weight to the text a little if needed? The glow on the text, to me, doesn't match the style and age of the site design. Try adding some small colour to the logo?
ah, just noticed the search , maybe decrease the size of this, its quite large at the moment and I don't think you want it to be that dominating?
Apart from them, I like the design, the light effect in the background is perfect..
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Kam Banwait commented:the arrows look better, but turn the curved grey surrounding to the same shape as the arrows, will create a more uniformed look on that border..
search is better too ..
yep the logo still needs some work, im thinking may loose the curls n italics and just look for a font that compliments the site really, Im in to my simple but elegant styles so it might not be what your looking for..
content wise, I like them, maybe remove that advert space at the top and make another on the side, I don't like to see adverts before I see the main content. I think you can be more creative with adverts now and I definatly think you should loose that one at the top ..
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Kam Banwait commented:
Sorry, I looked at the logo again.. I think you can make that work with a different colour :)
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I like the arrows and the search area that you added. It goes well with the design. I really dont like the logo though. I would also take off the blueish purple color. Acent it with a bolder color to make the logo stand out. Also, I would change the font of the new logo you posted. Too cartoony for this site.
Thx for your comment :)
And what about the content ? I have to write a post for every place but the main aim is that ok for you ? it seems right ?
What do you think i made some changes ( last screen ) for the arrows and for the 'search' ( don't look @ the logo i'm still looking for the right color ) ?