Alex Ventpap

UBC-CS - Department of Computer Science

By Alex Ventpap

   on Sep 21, 2010
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Concept Reviews

  • Bob @73

    Bob @73

    Rank: 3 Superior

    262

    • Design: 2
    • Purpose: 2
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 2
    0 Votes
    Some ideas.

    Posted on Sep 21, 2010 at 5:46 PM

    Some ideas I had.

    The UBC logo seems a bit small and is dwarfed by the large blue box to it's right. In fact the entire header comes across as rather weak. Brand first ! , it's a university, think "strong", "prestigious" and "capable" not "thin" and "boring".

    It is difficult to give advice on what your asking for with "lor ipsem" text, design with real content, not dummy text. This is a cardinal rule I see being broken all the time, down with dummy text!

    The main photo is engaging, but the dummy photo's are really not. No ones wants to see a boring grey building or some bad hallway photo. Again.. use real photos and not dummy ones and remember photos are the first thing people look at, so make them great, even if it's a blog post. This ain't your family photo album.

    You need a more solid call to action, you want to "engage" users then make a call to action that engages them. A simple but effective "learn more" can work wonders if done right for new prospects. Since you have a specific goal in mind don't confuse users with to many options and leave them hanging, guide them through what you want them to know.

    There is a lack of social media options to get involved, this is a community.

    The footer is nice, but grouse mountain is way bigger then that, and where the hell is the ocean. :)

  • Rashid Deziner

    Rashid Deziner

    Rank: 4 Master

    66

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 2
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Draft

    Posted on Sep 22, 2010 at 12:58 AM

    The Design is looking nice but the background is not looking good especially from the bottom part ( mountains ), else looking nice :)

  • Michael Lajlev

    Michael Lajlev

    Rank: 2 Titan

    592

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 4
    0 Votes
    a great start

    Posted on Sep 22, 2010 at 12:15 PM

    Ithink you should try work on the the 2. & 3. footer element. Your top banner definity also has room for improvement. Like your grid is making nice invisible boxes. Good job.

  • Bryant Maroney

    Bryant Maroney

    Rank: 4 Master

    829

    • Design: 4
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Not sure where to look first...

    Posted on Sep 23, 2010 at 12:09 PM

    The text on this site seems to be all over the place. I am not quite sure where to look first.

    How about extending the featured image box to cover the additional info in the right side.

    Here's a pick of what I am talking about:

    http://flic.kr/p/8Ds5cd

    • Alex Ventpap
      Alex Ventpap commented:
      Posted: on Sep 24, 2010 at 2:14 PM

      Hi Bryant. thanks for the review. Can you please remove the picture from this flickr account on the link above?

      thanks, Alex

  • Brent Copstead

    Brent Copstead

    Rank: 3 Superior

    119

    • Design: 3
    • Purpose: 4
    • Originality: 3
    • Engagement: 3
    0 Votes
    Bottom Add Color

    Posted on Sep 23, 2010 at 4:53 PM

    I like the overall look and feel, but I think if you added some color to the bottom mountains like green, it would add more to the overall site. the light blue looks dull.