Nick

Vanguard Logo

By Nick

   on Sep 20, 2010
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  • Hector Rodriguez

    Hector Rodriguez

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    Needs Improvement

    Posted on Sep 20, 2010 at 3:12 PM

    Hi, You're on the right track. What comes to my mind is: What is the purpose of vanguard/digital? What do they do?

    Looking closely, the letters G and R seems to be out of placed. Try replacing them

  • Ryan Elliott Turner

    Ryan Elliott Turner

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    Come up with print version

    Posted on Sep 21, 2010 at 12:09 AM

    I like it a lot for web. All I would worry about is recreating it in print. On clothing and pamphlets, this will get mushy.

    Definitely fails to develop your brand, though.

  • Birger Eelen

    Birger Eelen

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    Make the 'Guard' heavier

    Posted on Sep 22, 2010 at 4:19 AM

    I like the minimal design, the missing horizontal line in the A. I only think the weight difference between the 'VAN' and the 'GUARD' is too big, on the web it'll work but try and print it on low quality, the give it a go in a bad copier at low quality and see if it's still readable.

    Other than that: it looks great but I haven't got the slightest clue what to expect from vanguard. Maybe adding a punchy tagline will add some clarity?

  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    I like it...

    Posted on Sep 23, 2010 at 3:28 AM

    Nick

    I really like this, I think it's a huge improvement on the first.

    I do have some critique though:

    • The U in guard looks like it's been stretched
    • The lower curve on the R looks a little flat

    Overall nice simple and pleasing to the eye!

    Good Luck!

  • Mohammed Fahsi

    Mohammed Fahsi

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    the G

    Posted on Sep 23, 2010 at 11:17 AM

    I really like the logo, its simple and strong. There is just one thing about the G that bothers me somehow, i get the feeling that the G is much bigger (thicker) than the UAR in Guard. But it's just a minor thing.

    Also i'm worried about the logo as a small print. The logo is perfect for the web, but i on print i think it will cause you some problems.

  • Brent Copstead

    Brent Copstead

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    What Company?

    Posted on Sep 23, 2010 at 5:00 PM

    To get a better understanding if the logo is a good fit, I would really need to know what type of company this is for. I do like the logo.

    --- ok, I followed the link. I think you need to add some color.

  • Jens Busse

    Jens Busse

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    nothing to say it deepend an you target

    Posted on Sep 24, 2010 at 4:44 AM

    it looks designy and really professional .

    it looks also like 80´s is looks also like a fashin label for me . i dont like this kind of fashin stuff - for this reason only 2 Engagement point from my site.

  • Ruweed Bibi

    Ruweed Bibi

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    looks professional but eh

    Posted on Sep 24, 2010 at 2:06 PM

    I like it but eh. Professional? Yes. Boring? Yes. So I guess it depends on what you are looking for.

  • Hassan Ijtaba

    Hassan Ijtaba

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    Change the font..

    Posted on Sep 30, 2010 at 9:03 AM

    Vanguard In Dictionary...

    1. the foremost division or the front part of an army; advance guard; van. 2. the forefront in any movement, field, activity, or the like. 3. the leaders of any intellectual or political movement. 4. ( initial capital letter ) Rocketry . a U.S. three-stage, satellite-launching rocket, the first two stages powered by liquid-propellant engines and the third by a solid-propellant engine

    Nick vanguard represents something strong and solid...So try using a solid font...thick and bold...right now it looks like VAN is strong and GUARD is very week...

    I suggest make more designs....Good luck...:)

  • Roro

    Roro

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    Like

    Posted on Oct 02, 2010 at 10:30 AM

    I like it

  • Gemma-Lea Goodyer

    Gemma-Lea Goodyer

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    I like it.

    Posted on Oct 04, 2010 at 3:44 PM

    I think its lovely. The different weights work well, overall it looks quite modern but still quite elegant.

    Perhaps a couple of adjustments on the letter spacing.

    Otherwise, very nice.