Kunal

Website Design

By Kunal

   on Sep 15, 2010
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  • Abhishek Kumar

    Abhishek Kumar

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    • Engagement: 3
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    a few things..

    Posted on Sep 15, 2010 at 8:02 AM

    overall, it looks good, however:

    i think there are too many design elements floating on top (too many cloth pieces), and they are way too prominent, your company logo and as well as the navigation items are not getting any attention because of that.

    the three square pieces of cloths look like a placeholder for something - you can reduce the size for these.

    i see you have a thread like line dividing two columns, make it more like a thread and let it end just before the footer. also, make it looks like it is coming from one of your cloth pieces from top (let it come out from big brown piece)

    since you have a lot or boxes here in irregular shapes- the process image looks too flat. may be u need to do the some border treatment there..

    • Kunal
      Kunal commented:
      Posted: on Sep 16, 2010 at 1:13 AM

      will surely try to work.. i found your comment helpful.. cheers. thanks a lot :)

    • Luke Marohn
      Luke Marohn commented:
      Posted: on Sep 18, 2010 at 3:27 PM

      @kunal, Abhishek covered everything That i wanted to say, He just missed one thing.

      On the peices of cloth. they are way to square. Distort the edges a bit and you should be good!

    • Kunal
      Kunal commented:
      Posted: on Sep 19, 2010 at 2:25 AM

      okie.. :)

  • Renaye Thornborrow

    Renaye Thornborrow

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    • Engagement: 3
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    Visibility of text

    Posted on Sep 15, 2010 at 11:50 AM

    This is an interesting site. I like the colors and the feel of the site but it leaves me confused.

    First, I don't know where to go. There is too much going on with the fabric swatches and the patten up top. The sizors look like and arrow so I thougth I was supposed to be looking at the pattern.

    Also, white text on a dark background is very hard to read. It gets lost on the page.

    I can't see it from here, but do you have a call to action? What do you want me to do when I get to the site?

    You may want to show some product shots of garments made from your fabric. Get me pulled into what I am going to look like/feel like when I go with you!

    Also, make sure you differentiate your business on the front page. Why should I pick you over other providers?

    Good luck wiht your business!

    • Kunal
      Kunal commented:
      Posted: on Sep 16, 2010 at 1:14 AM

      thankyou Renaye... will try to note your comment... :)

  • Kim W.

    Kim W.

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    Its alright, but...

    graphics there are definitely too many things going on in this page. The design elements look to kitschy... I would suggest removing most of them, and focusing your graphic space on actual product images. Focus on the items you want members to buy. Big, clean, impressive product images.

    text There is a lot of psychology behind getting people to read. People skip over big blocks of text. People don't like long columns of text. (This is why newspapers divide the paper into skinny columns) -Divide the welcome text into 2 skinny columns. -Give all headers "Welcome","process"&"latest news" the same size and weight. Also make their placement more organized. They look strewn about. -Headers should be prominent & bold -Move text hight on the page, keep secondary graphics lower and to the sides.

    • Kunal
      Kunal commented:
      Posted: on Sep 17, 2010 at 6:03 AM

      hiee Kim... thanks for your feedback.. i know some small small things can be changed.. :) will do.

  • Ghalib Hasnain

    Ghalib Hasnain

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    theme is good with lack of material and interaction

    Posted on Sep 18, 2010 at 12:32 AM

    old idea with different theme

  • Ania

    Ania

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    "Welcome" - change font, or colour...?

    Posted on Sep 18, 2010 at 4:09 AM

    Hi, this looks great! I like the details and textures, something that I have to work more in my design ;) I would only change the word "welcome", maybe use image title (with some unique font and colours) if you don't need to change it often?

    • Kunal
      Kunal commented:
      Posted: on Sep 18, 2010 at 4:54 AM

      hi Ania.. ohh thanx a ton :) ya will try to work out with different font which suits it..

  • Nick

    Nick

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    • Design: 4
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    Work on Content

    Posted on Sep 20, 2010 at 1:27 AM

    Overall nice feel although i think maybe a little cluttered could do with some more negative space

    I think the Body copy lacks the design that the rest of the site has i would work more on getting that type just right

  • Bryant Maroney

    Bryant Maroney

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    Looking Good

    Posted on Sep 23, 2010 at 1:54 PM

    It's looking really good...nice job

  • Brent Copstead

    Brent Copstead

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    Great Layout

    Posted on Sep 23, 2010 at 4:43 PM

    This is a great layout for your client. I like the originality and the way you used the clients products in the site.

    Really catches your eye.

    • Kunal
      Kunal commented:
      Posted: on Sep 24, 2010 at 12:34 AM

      thanks for you feedback :)

  • Silviu S

    Silviu S

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    Nice theme

    Posted on Sep 15, 2010 at 4:52 AM

    This is a nice theme you picked up for your website. I like the colors and the header and footer treatment.

    It's pretty solid on the bottom, but I think you can work better on the header. Also emphasize more the logo and have better contrast for top navigation.

    Overall on first look I think it engages the viewer.

    • Kunal
      Kunal commented:
      Posted: on Sep 15, 2010 at 5:02 AM

      thankyou so much for your appreciation.. i have done that change of navigation ... site is going to be live soon :)

  • Ben Hewitt

    Ben Hewitt

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    Bit busy

    Posted on Sep 15, 2010 at 5:29 AM

    Hi!

    I like where you've gone with it a lot - it definately suits the theme of the business.

    i think you may have overloaded it a touch, it's quite busy and you've got lots of elements that draw the eye but the colours are nice.

    I think youd do well to lose the arrow at the bottom and the swirl top right and maybe increase the width of the content area itself (welcome and latest news section)

    Itd be nice to incorporate actions into the elements liek the thread bottom left and the fabric samples on the right - maybe these could be links themselves?

    Overall nice though