Nick LovellPremium Concept

New Business Cards, Website Matching and Overall Design

By Nick Lovell

   on Sep 14, 2010
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  • Aurimas Adomavicius

    Aurimas Adomavicius

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    I pick the striped one...

    Posted on Sep 14, 2010 at 5:10 PM

    Hey there,

    first - I don't think that the business card and the website have to match 100%. In fact as long as the logo and the style of the card / website are similar you will be fine.

    Love the photography on the site, good work.

    Regarding the card itself - I really like the stripped one. Patterns in general are really appealing to me on business cards.

    Sometimes it's helpful to have the email address on your card since you want to give people a direct way of contacting you, not just viewing the site.

    other than that I can't really pick on much else - it's pretty crisp, nice typography, etc.

  • Richard Miles

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    It's ok, but...

    Posted on Sep 14, 2010 at 3:21 PM

    I too am a fan of spot varnish. It is a cool feature, but adds expense to your business cards for the sake of cool factor. Are your business cards such a big part of your outreach plan, or just a vanity? Either way, from a design standpoint, I like the second version best. It's hard to really get a true sense of the look and feel from the screen, and I looked at this on two different monitors to see if there were any subtle differences. If you're going to go for it, why not use the diagonal lines shown in version 4, (and just the lines, no text) in white, on the back side of the card?

    • Nick Lovell
      Nick Lovell commented:
      Posted: on Sep 14, 2010 at 4:17 PM

      Hey there! Thanks for your insightful review! The cool factor is really what it's about, to be sure. However, the place where I'm going to have these printed is going to throw in the spot gloss for free, so the expense isn't an issue. Also, I was hoping to fill the reverse side with an actual photo... I know there are probably some strong opinions out there about this, but I feel like a business card for a photographer without a picture is like a graphic designer having only simple black text centered on a white card like a doctor or lawyer's... In a way I feel like I should be able to use the card as an on-the-spot mini portfolio review. Do you think that's a valid position, or do you think it can hurt more than it helps? I actually have an event coming up where I'm definitely going to be handing out cards, so while it might not be a huge part of my overall marketing strategy, I would like to generate some leads from this particular event.

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      Richard Miles commented:
      Posted: on Sep 14, 2010 at 4:27 PM

      In my opinion, spend more time laying out the back then. A simple photo isn't enough. Make sure the photo is intriguing and very interesting on its own. Don't put the single face shot from your webpage on their -- use a photo that really highlights your unique skills as a shooter. You could also frame around the photo in spot varnish, or "paint" a layer over a single color in your photo.

  • Abhishek Kumar

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    3rd mixed with 4th

    Posted on Sep 14, 2010 at 3:27 PM

    i would prefer number 4 with the positioning of number 3. also, i believe the spacing between both the lines could increase a bit..

  • Bart Van Deuren

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    black is beautiful

    Posted on Sep 14, 2010 at 4:45 PM

    Black is really the most beautiful color. I would definitely go for the first with the positioning of the 3rd.

    I think that the fourth concept is more a webdesign than a businesscard.

  • Emma Simpson

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    tweaks on the typography

    Posted on Sep 14, 2010 at 5:03 PM

    Hi Nick,

    As far as the design of your card goes, it is nice. You can use nice spot varnish effects with the spot varnish just used alone on white maybe with the spot varnish making up the diagonal stripe alternate stripes. Then use a lovely subtle shade of warm grey for your type.

    Would like to see the website address line made a little larger so the beginning of www aligns with the beginning of the 'l' of 'lovell' - just think it would help neaten and tighten it up a bit - also your kerning needs sorting out on your name. It's tighter on the 'll' than on the 'ov'

    Have read the comments and things on other reviews and your thoughts on photographs on your card etc...

    I worked as a designer and then an Art Director in glossy women's fashion magazines so have seen my fair share of photographers' cards.

    Generally a small format business card is type only. A few photographers I've seen use photographs on small scale cards but mostly photographers cards that they send in or hand to me are large postcard format with a large image on one side and a few smaller ones on the other with their name and contact details on. Normally the photograph is some gorgeous thing - these postcards sometimes are spot varnished but mostly not. Generally I use photographers cards as visual prompt of their work and would keep a file of them. Type alone is useless for this as I saw lots of photographers every week and just wouldn't be able to remember the work from the name alone unless I knew of their work already.

    Using a full bleed image on the back of this card would be a little strange and just wouldn't work at all for me as it's so out of keeping with the front style wise. Maybe three squares on the back with crops of some of your images as a visual prompt to your work.

    Again though for me you have to go with white if you want to tie in with your website and a nice heavyweight white card with a spot varnish and tasteful type beautifully set is hard to beat. I think people get carried away with the black because it works so well visually on screen - in print it is a different story. You'd have to go registration black so four colour or a special and getting the white type so it is nice and sharp out of it when it is small and v fine is a hard thing to pull off plus it's out of keeping with your site.

    Hope this helps - any questions, just fire away :)

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      Emma Simpson commented:
      Posted: on Sep 14, 2010 at 5:22 PM

      PS Your about blurb type on your website is too small to read on screen and there is no way of enlarging it. I'm on a mac but you're site is flash so shouldn't make a difference.

      Also it is too tight to the edge of the image it is next to - needs some room to breathe.

    • Nick Lovell
      Nick Lovell commented:
      Posted: on Sep 14, 2010 at 5:35 PM

      Emma, thank you so much for your thoughtful review of both my business card and website! Thanks especially for the very specific typography feedback. I love the idea of 3 squares on the back! And I agree, the type is really butting up against the content area of the site. I'll definitely look into giving it some more breathing room, and also resizing the site in the window itself... I have it set to give the main content a nice wide border, but upon looking at it, I agree... It should be larger. Thanks again!

    • Emma Simpson
      Emma Simpson commented:
      Posted: on Sep 14, 2010 at 5:53 PM

      Hi again Nick - sorry for the website bit. It was a bit cheeky as I know you didn't ask for website review but the rest of your site is working so well, it would be nice for it all to look as good. Have put up quick mock up of images for the back - actually may be nice to have three blue toned images - I did look for a third with another strong colour where the crop could work in that small format and also for the strongest visually and where the lighting feels fairly consistent through the images. There are some images in your portfolio which feel very out of keeping with the rest but maybe you want to show that you can do this kind of work too but to me it cheapens your whole portfolio.

      One of my favourite photographers is Jason Bell who I worked with when he first started out and he just gets better and better. His portfolio site is here: http://www.jasonbellphoto.com/#/photographer/Jason%20Bell/Portraits/ - you can see he has a million different feels in terms of lighting and style but there is something very distinctive which is just him which runs through all his work. He always was good at noticing the little things and just getting to the essence of what made someone who they were or the mood of a scene very quickly.

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      Nick Lovell commented:
      Posted: on Sep 14, 2010 at 6:10 PM

      No worries at all on the website comments, in fact they're very much welcome! Thanks also for going above and beyond creating the mockup above - that was amazing of you. Jason Bell is a great photographer and love his work.

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    Go with WHITE!

    Posted on Sep 14, 2010 at 5:16 PM

    I love black in design, it can be elegant, formal, or even sinister. By far my favorite color to work with....but.

    I'm of the school that your branding should always remain consistent, always without exception. It's the whole point of branding! This includes color choice across all your media, web, print, video, any advertising.

    Consider why you chose white as the main color for your website, why that particular shade of gray for your logo. For these same reasons you should be using them in your cards.

    Yes the black is very slick with a gloss overlay, but it works on white as well, and it can give your card a kind of subtle design detail that can still be appreciated without being too obvious. The use of white space on your website will work just as effectively in your card.

    Arrange your logo exactly as it is on the website, use the rule of thirds and place it to the left of center, and move the info (web address, number and email) to the back of the card, bottom third. Then you can also place your best shot on the back to showcase your unique approach to photography. (I'd even consider going with a black and white photo too).

    I hope this helps!

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    Draft

    Posted on Sep 15, 2010 at 4:20 AM

    i like the third sample.. its nice and professional ..

    ya please don't play with black or grey if your website does not consist of these colors..
    try to design something related to your business as well as a touch of your website.. it will look really nice :)

  • Farrah Baird

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    type tweaks

    Posted on Sep 15, 2010 at 10:35 AM

    I love simple, understated design. So well done there.

    Agree with some spacing issues mentioned: too much kerning around the 'v'. Need more space between logo and contact info.

    I also think the contact info should be bigger. It's a primary purpose of the biz card and seems like it could be hard to read.

    I'd like to see the placement be similar to #3, but maybe at 2/3 instead of all the way to bottom. In which case the 3 photos on the back would be best suited in the same bottom-aligned placement.

    Have you considered doing a reverse color scheme to your site? Gray background, white type. You'd get more interest than with standard white card, but still keep to web site design/colors.

    Good luck!

  • Tom Charde

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    #4 + #2 = #6

    Posted on Sep 15, 2010 at 11:08 AM

    I agree with everything that Aurimas said, including concept #4 being the frontrunner.

    But I propose a small adjustment (see attached mockup): switch the content block out with the one used in #2. The content blocks in #2 and #4 both have black backgrounds, but the text in #2 is lighter. The diagonal stripes in #4 have a slight camouflaging effect on the text, making it tougher on the eye. Using a lighter text color will fix that, and #2 has the perfect shade of gray (not too dark, not too light.) Anyway, that's my suggestion for a "#6."

    I don't think there'd be a significant brand disconnect between any of these business cards and your website. It sounds like you may be considering a site revamp (good idea - the current site has issues and isn't doing you justice), which would be a good opportunity to incorporate elements from the business card - assuming that's where you see your brand evolving. Personally, I think that's a good direction for you.

    And by the way... As the lone UF grad in a family of Bama, LSU and Auburn alumni - I can totally sympathize with your football story. ;-)

    -Tom

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    Card reader friendly business card

    Posted on Sep 14, 2010 at 9:10 PM

    I like the 3rd version better.

    A couple of suggestions (not mandatory though)

    1) Check to see if the design is card reader friendly. Can the information on the card be automatically scanned and recognized by popular business card reader software (who would want to enter information manually these days )

    2) Can u add a microsoft tag (http://tag.microsoft.com/consumer/index.aspx) which when scanned from a mobile will take the visitor to your portfolio.