Ivan Kocis

Larousse

By Ivan Kocis

   on Sep 02, 2010
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  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    I agree with Luke

    Posted on Sep 02, 2010 at 9:08 PM

    Ivan this is outdated and I hope that you don't get offended to easily, but I just find this really dull and boring.

    The colors, the design is unimaginative and basically OLD...

    I suggest that you do a bit more research on some inspiring book designs, see below link:

    http://www.smashingmagazine.com/2008/06/16/beautiful-brochures-and-booklets/

    None of these is ever going to make me pick up an encyclopedia...

    Research and experiment, I would love to have this project, you really could have some serious fun with it.

    All the best

    • Ivan Kocis
      Ivan Kocis commented:
      Posted: on Sep 06, 2010 at 10:11 AM

      This one was very helpful. Thank you very much!

  • Luke Marohn

    Luke Marohn

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    OutDated.

    Posted on Sep 02, 2010 at 4:06 PM

    Hi Ivan,

    Here are my thoughts about your design.

    • Seems very dark, I would lighten up the colors a bit.
    • The font is very out dated, Check out some cool san serif fonts on dafont.com or something
    • The Blending of the images on the front could use some work too. They seem very dark and the statue looks completely out of place,
    • Hopefully I'm not totally stupid, as i have never used an encylapedia, but If it has more than just archatechure in it, then add something else in, PEOPLE! ANIMALS! BUILDINGS! PLANTS!

    In fact, a cool thing to do would be like On the left have a desert theme, have the pyramids, snakes, cactus

    Then that fades into like an urban scene, with cool urban stuff, from there it goes into a rainforest, with monkeys and other coolio stuff, and then fades into like an ocean at the end.

    Just an idea though >.>

    I also feel the colors you chose dont really fit together,

    http://www.kuler.com will fix that though!

    Good Luck! all i have to say is

    Keep it simple, creative and modern! hopefully we can help you do that.

  • Mirko Votta

    Mirko Votta

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    Draft

    Posted on Sep 03, 2010 at 11:38 AM

    Well. It seems to me too dark, the encyclopedia it's very old but we are in 2010, I would try with something more innovative and colorful...

    You can find nice color combination or texture on www.colourlovers.com

    The image is very very hard to find, I would not try with a collage but maybe with a leonardo image or even nothing...

    Good work

    • Ivan Kocis
      Ivan Kocis commented:
      Posted: on Sep 06, 2010 at 10:15 AM

      I guess you need some points and reviews, so......... I`m finding this concept very helpful! :)

    • Mirko Votta
      Mirko Votta commented:
      Posted: on Sep 09, 2010 at 11:11 AM

      Tnx. And you can find beautiful images on www.istockphoto.com at low cost, read carefully the license...

    • Ivan Kocis
      Ivan Kocis commented:
      Posted: on Sep 29, 2010 at 6:41 PM

      Specially that part with licence ;)