David Ingledow

Portrait Concept

By David Ingledow

   on Aug 02, 2009
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Concept Reviews

  • Keith Donaldson

    Keith Donaldson

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    • Design: 5
    • Purpose: 3
    • Originality: 4
    • Engagement: 4
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    Mouth

    Posted on Aug 02, 2009 at 7:59 AM

    This is great, really nice use of colours and lighting. One thing I would change is that the mouth could have bit of light in it, instead of a grayscale.

    Also, if you add the the top-half of the body to the image, i think it would really cap the whole thing off.

    • David Ingledow
      David Ingledow commented:
      Posted: on Aug 02, 2009 at 8:01 AM

      Do you mean that I should add more of the body to finish it off?

    • Keith Donaldson
      Keith Donaldson commented:
      Posted: on Aug 02, 2009 at 8:02 AM

      I think if you add the top half of the t-shirt (or whatever fits right) it will make it a bit more realistic, because right now it looks a bit like a floating head.

    • David Ingledow
      David Ingledow commented:
      Posted: on Aug 02, 2009 at 8:06 AM

      I see what you mean about the floating head.

      How would you recommend that I cut off the image. Should I feather it out like I have done above? But obviously with more of the body and t shirt showing.

    • Keith Donaldson
      Keith Donaldson commented:
      Posted: on Aug 02, 2009 at 8:07 AM

      What I would do is make the t-shirt go all the way to the bottom so that there is no need to akwardly feather out the image.

  • Brian Caicco

    Brian Caicco

    Rank: 1 Elite

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    • Design: 1
    • Purpose: 1
    • Originality: 1
    • Engagement: 1
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    What is the purpose?

    Posted on Aug 03, 2009 at 7:27 AM

    not really sure what is going on here, i can't give you feedback if i don't even know what the concept is.