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i like the concept but u can do a lot to improve it- at least try a few things..
may be use just the leafs to create the palm shape.
instead of using a circle in background, try a different shape, something circular only but not exact circle.
the font used for 'prima planta' is not fitting well here, try something else, may be one of the handwritten fonts.
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Birger Eelen commented:For me these are very helpful comments; I think your new corrections and colors make it look even better!
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Can you explain the graphical logo? To be honest I can't figure out what it should resemble, what it should tell.
The design is simple, well readable font. The purpose isn't clear to me at all; maybe after an explanation I'll see the light Originality: it's a common layout, so nothing special to mention here Engagement: As I said before, the logo doesn't tell me what's it about. My first thought was that this was a logo for butter or something (In Belgium we have a company who makes baking butter called 'Planta').
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Cedric Ruiz commented:
It's supposed to be a hand made of plants reaching for the sun. That's the idea. I don't think a logo should always tell what the company does. My idea is to give a "nature" look and feeling.
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Birger Eelen commented:
Fair enough, now I know what it is, it makes more sense! I think giving the hand a thumb and it'll be crystal clear!
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Cedric Ruiz commented:
Thats why there's two leaves at the bottom. The big one is the palm and the little one is the thumb.
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Cedric Ruiz commented:
I uploaded a new version with some small corrections, let me know if it's more clear now
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Birger Eelen commented:
For me it's a lot beter. If I may focus on the little details: if you want to make it look like a hand even more, I'd make the palm leave a bit bigger. Maybe a suggestive stem (2 lines, could be figurative as an arm or a stem)
The new version is definitely a huge improvement!
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Cedric Ruiz commented:
I made the palm a bit bigger, tell me what you think. Thx for your feedback.
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I love your concept as well as your color scheme, I would just like to see the leaf look more complete, make it one shape, after you close the small space I think this would be a successful design
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Cedric Ruiz commented:
Thank you all for the comments. The deadline ended yesterday so I gave it to the client and she's very happy.
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Love the first one and the last one - I especially like the type on the last version
It might be becoming a little too complex but Im liking the concept
Overall they're good, but I think Id go with the final version as my favourite - maybe you could lose the yellow circle and try to incorporate the colour into the rest of the logo?
But good stuff!
Thx for the comments. I made some changes based on your feedback. I changed the palm shape a little bit and I tried the handwritten font. What do you think?