Amith Shetty

Layout Feedback for Music Site

By Amith Shetty

   on Aug 31, 2010
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  • Aaran Casey

    Aaran Casey

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    ummm...

    Posted on Aug 31, 2010 at 9:48 PM

    Well, I don't really know what to say other than urgh...

    You state "Most hiphopsites are really unorganized, and don't look too good design wise" - Maybe I am looking a different site, but design wise this is not that great.

    My suggestion is to research your medium - hip hop, research it very well, because hip Hop, is quite street and funky and unfortunately your site not only doesn't reflect that, it's giving hip hop a bad name.

    Not even the font that you have chosen is remotely "hip hop"... try using aight - dafont.com...

    Once you researched your genre / target audience, go back and research "inspirational website design" in google...

    I hope that you can improve it before launching it, as I think you wont get very far...

    Good Luck!

  • Susie Sahim

    Susie Sahim

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    rethink typography and layout

    Posted on Aug 31, 2010 at 9:49 PM

    It seems like you are trying to do the layout, design, and code all at the same time. Instead, put the html and css aside for a while. Just open up an image editor and work out the layout and design. Right now the layout and typography is really hurting here and needs some rethinking. start with just a wireframe. it will save you a lot of time and pain if you work out the layout in an image editor first, then when you get a design you are comfortable with, start to code it in html, css.

    For more specifics: - the overall design of the page feels very disorganized. Things don't seem to have been placed on the page with any sort of purpose in mind. - the content on the left is center aligned which feels very odd within the context of the rest of the page. Make it left aligned instead. - the blog area by itself looks very good but there's an oddly large empty space above it. - try making "hottest tracks" look as nice as the blog area - it's hard to distinguish what is clickable and what isn't. I think it's because you are using the same text color for links as you use for plain text. Also you are using a non standard web font for the body text which makes everything feel like it is a headline rather than text and links. - the gradient behind the center content area doesn't match the color scheme of the rest of the site - When visiting your test site in Chrome there is no pause button. The music auto played and I wasn't able to stop it. - instead of text, try using icons to indicate play/pause