Ashok Suthar

Coming Soon Page.

By Ashok Suthar

   on Aug 27, 2010
9 Reviews1 Vote1 Favorite389 Views

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  • Priyadarshan

    Priyadarshan

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    Make it interesting!

    Posted on Aug 27, 2010 at 8:29 AM

    Here's how you can make it more interesting:

    1) I checked your site and the progress indicator is static. Add countdown timer which updates this process indicator.

    2) Add a "Email me when site is up" textbox in which user gives his email address and you can send him / her email once you are up and running.

    This way you won't loose your customers who visit your site.

    Rest all looks promising! Keep up the good work!

    • Ashok Suthar
      Ashok Suthar commented:
      Posted: on Aug 27, 2010 at 8:40 AM

      Thanks for your suggestion. I will try to implement your idea.

    • Priyadarshan
      Priyadarshan commented:
      Posted: on Aug 27, 2010 at 10:57 AM

      If you like my suggestions, don't forget to vote and award credit for this review :)

  • Kim Phillips

    Kim Phillips

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    Love the idea.

    Posted on Aug 27, 2010 at 7:15 AM

    Showing progress on the "coming soon" is smart, especially if there is traffic coming to the site already and frequently. Makes me want to come back and see the site!

  • Gayatri Raut

    Gayatri Raut

    Rank: 10 Newbie

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    Good Design

    Posted on Aug 27, 2010 at 7:35 AM

    nice design only one point give the same icon effect of facebook & blog to follow me

  • Hallie Steube

    Hallie Steube

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    Draft

    Posted on Aug 27, 2010 at 12:19 PM

    I think it's a great idea... could you also post a snap-shot or sneak peak at what the updates are? And then update your Twitter and Facebook followers as the progress percentage increases?

  • Abdul-Hadi Hawari

    Abdul-Hadi Hawari

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    Just the size

    Posted on Aug 27, 2010 at 3:08 PM

    Very nice concept and cool colors

    but the size of the pic in the browser is so big !! and I think you should work on make it a bit smaller e.g.(height <= 450px )

    and the twitter bird is a little bit big if you compare it with the other two social networks icons ..


    and if we are talking technical side so I think you should add some meta tags in your HTML code and change the links from map to normal links so the spiders of the search engines could index some links from you page.. before you go online.

    that's all ...

    hope to see nice design after this lovely coming soon page ;)

  • Carl Andersson

    Carl Andersson

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    Make it more alive.

    Posted on Aug 27, 2010 at 6:02 PM

    The design and concept overall is great but make it more alive is the only thing i can contribute whit.

    Try for an example to make the processbar moving and changing colors, that would make the website way more interesting.

    Check out this link: http://jqueryui.com/demos/progressbar/#animated

  • Abhishek Kumar

    Abhishek Kumar

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    soon..

    Posted on Aug 30, 2010 at 12:26 PM

    nice concept.. however, what is coming soon.. give us a hint.. would it be ur personal site, or it is a blog.. what should we expect when the design progress becomes 100%. also, im not a big fan of font face used for 'web & graphic designer'.

    • Ashok Suthar
      Ashok Suthar commented:
      Posted: on Sep 06, 2010 at 6:41 AM

      Thanks Abhishek for your coments. Actually i going to make a my personal site where i can show my creativity work online.

  • Joey Adkins

    Joey Adkins

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    Nothing

    Posted on Aug 30, 2010 at 2:33 PM

    I really dig this concept. Enough said!

  • Matej Sabol

    Matej Sabol

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    Draft

    Posted on Sep 02, 2011 at 5:24 AM

    Hi.

    • "Social icons" with text you can make lover i think. Consistency could be good too(FB, W are different from Twitter).

    • Progress bar maybe thiner.

    • Try put there a text box to let users sign up when the site be ready.