Caion Alves

Logo e Marca

By Caion Alves

   on Aug 26, 2010
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  • Priyadarshan

    Priyadarshan

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    Nice Logo

    Posted on Aug 26, 2010 at 10:48 PM

    1) Nice logo, but where is the technology part in this logo?

    I assume that this logo is yours. My below suggestion is keeping that in mind.

    2) Are you telling users that you can only work on simple things? You need to show your skills in design by the way you design your logo.

    Your logo creates the first impression in your user's mind. So keeping it too simple may not be a good idea.

    Hope this helps.

    • Ferdy Christant
      Ferdy Christant commented:
      Posted: on Aug 27, 2010 at 3:28 AM

      As a general remark, I disagree. Typically the best logos are extremely simple, yet clever and memorable.

    • Caion Alves
      Caion Alves commented:
      Posted: on Aug 27, 2010 at 6:21 AM

      Hello! It is a logo for myself. My site sells logo creation services. The technology would be at the source, but something very subtle, gradient recall something metallic!

  • Ben Gillbanks

    Ben Gillbanks

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    Not sure what the message is

    Posted on Aug 27, 2010 at 4:46 AM

    I'm not sure what the brand is and I don't speak spanish (is it spanish?) so can't understand the website however below is what I think.

    You need to think about the purpose of the website and the message you are sending, so keep these ideas in mind:

    1) What is the purpose of the website? 2) What elements of the website are you trying to relate in the logo?

    At the moment I think the logo looks like the elements you see on the weather on the tv. It doesn't seem to relate to the concept of technology at all.

    Actual critiques on the existing logo are:

    1) The edges where the sun meets the cloud look messy and confused. Reducing the amount of rays on the sun and pushing it around a bit will simplify it. 2) the bottom edge of the clouds has a sharp corner, which isn't attractive. Rounding it off will give it a more organic look tying to the nature influence you mentioned. 3) The type is ok, but a bit boring, and the gradient doesn't fit the flat look of the rest of the logo

    Really I think the logo concept needs a bit more thought. Unfortunately, as I said before, I am not sure what the logo is for so I have had to guess based upon your brief description.

    • Caion Alves
      Caion Alves commented:
      Posted: on Aug 27, 2010 at 6:24 AM

      My site is in Portuguese (Brazil). My site creation services to sell soon, and the translation is the logo: logo and brand. I do not have many "goals" to create a logo for this my site, as a logo for a site for creating logos not have many rules right? Just thought I'd be pretty visually, and pass the user the confidence that I create logos simple and beautiful! thanks!

  • Robin Francis

    Robin Francis

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    Bit more daring

    Posted on Aug 27, 2010 at 8:00 AM

    Nice logo, not much to add but it feels a bit safe for a logo designer. The logo seems to fit ore with a holiday company than a logo designer. It doesn't communicate the idea that you are a logo designer.

    • Caion Alves
      Caion Alves commented:
      Posted: on Aug 27, 2010 at 8:22 AM

      Thanks for the critique! I agree with you too!

  • Amith Shetty

    Amith Shetty

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    Different visual

    Posted on Aug 31, 2010 at 8:31 PM

    It's a great logo, and showcases your talent very well. Only thing was what kind of customers are you hoping to attract. Maybe something more professional if you are looking for businesses? For personal stuff this seems fine!