Website design for marketing consultant

Hi Kim

Well done, I think you've succeeded in conveying your message to your audience. It's abundantly clear (lucid, oh no!) where you're positioned and what your value proposition is. My only worry on that score is that it's not very original. If you encounter competition within your market, you might find it hard to adequately differentiate.

My major issue is with your headline font. I find it totally inappropriate for the level of client you're trying to attract. The hand lettering is not well formed and gives an impression of child-like scrawl (not in a good way).

The pictures (drop waves, spectacles) are superfluous. You don't need them, particularly as the point of the exercise is to be clear in meaning. I have no idea what the picture under the logo is. A keyboard?

Logotype is mismatched with droplet shape. It needs to conform more to the shape. The L is almost illegible.

Alignment issues throughout. Nothing lines up between the two columns.

While the blue is attractive in the logo and the pull-outs at left, having the whole site in blue is too much and too heavy.

The portfolio section could do with more thought. My suggestion would be smaller thumbnails in the left column opening up in a window in the main column. And I think the headline should be: Your style is our style.

Overall, it's a good start. Simple, effective and easy to read. Good luck with the next stage.

Hope this helps.

• The puddle on the home page doesn't fit the style of your logo. Lose the puddle.
  • The following text/font - "how clear is your marketing", "Make a Splash" and other various places you have this. You are trying to convey clear marketing. The font used does not relay that. It's more of a drawn font. You need a font that is crisp, clean and professional.
  • About Page - the colored background on the photo is cheesy. Lose it. You do not need it.
  • The following slogans - "Whatever it takes" and "Our Style is Your Style" - they both sound desperate. It's saying that you would do anything, and I do mean anything to get there business.
  • Contact, Resources, Portfolio pages - there is a lot of space between the logo and the footer of the page that could have additional information, i.e. client testimonies.
  • The "L" in the logo is really not very noticable. Either shrink your logo text so that it is clearing within the bounds of the drop, or widen the drop.
  • Not necessary to have the keyboard image on the home page.
  • Navigation - your home page link is in an odd place. Most people are going to look for the home link at the beginning.
  • Service Page - the list of items you do is too much. Narrow your services down to just a few with sub-catergories. Lose the colored background. Maybe put the items in a nice box, with bullets. LEFT align, not centered. All the questions in your content. People are looking for answers, not questions. Need to limit the questions and answer how the business can fulfill those.

hmmm looks like a water purification company :p font size is really smalll, you should increase it and show some marketing images to make it more catchy. :)

Nice use of white space.

Dont like the logo, better using more clean or light color scheme.

When 1st seeing it I thought it was a water company website, or some no profit eco company about water saving. IMHO I would start by removing water and the water drop. You can live teh small keyboard image, but I don't like it, its' ugly.